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A Qintain {Sicilian) Poetry Contest sponsored by Emile Pinet

poem edited and resubmitted 07/08/23

07/01/23

Sunshine Is My Pot of Gold

Clement weather is often just my dream. I don’t mind wispy white clouds way up high, or marshmallow ones topped with whipping cream. Alas, brooding nimbus are drawing nigh, I yearn for azure skies and one sunbeam! Raindrops fall, I hear them pitter-patter, then hail stones bounce upon my brand new car. I daren’t go outside and watch them batter my garden, too. Ice storms are so bizarre and their crashing makes such a loud clatter! Rain still teems down, it’s been pouring for hours. Where’s the warm sunshine, and vivid rainbow? Torn to shreds will be my lovely flowers, trellis of sweet peas, just starting to grow. How I loathe these sudden April showers! Dark clouds start to lift, a rainbow appears. Sun’s peeking through a minute patch of blue. Prisms of colour, I’ve so adored for years. I’ll venture out to get a better view for such a welcomed sight moves me to tears
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Merryman Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 7:27 PM
I felt like I was there Great write, Jan! Congrats on your win! blessings, Kim M
Pinet Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Congratulations Jan! Your poem earned you a distinguished place in my contest. You should be proud of your placing, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem rose above them; well done, my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 2:48 PM
Emile I am so so so proud to be on your winner's list, its only the second time I've attempted this form, thank YOU so much for inspiring me:-) hugs jan xx
Delaney Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 6:35 PM
I love it, Jan: You have written a wonderful Sicilian Quintain. You go girlfriend. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 2:47 PM
I'm so sorry I missed replying before Suz this is only my second attempt at this form. I still have so much to learn but I hope folk can see there is more to me than just a poop poet:-) hugs Jan xx
Lee Sr. Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Been a minute since I read your works. This verse is captivating lovely descriptive flavorful words compose a favor for me young lady be blessed this new day thanks for sharing ~James
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 3:39 AM
thanks so much James. I did take a long break away from soup but now I'm back for good:-) hugs jan xx
George Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 9:15 PM
.... "marshmallow clouds topped with whipping cream." I love this. I too like a sunny day. Cloudy and rainy days make my spirits sink low. Lovely poem, Jan
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 3:39 AM
yes its no wonder people suffer from SAD syndrome when the weather is dull especially over winter. hugs jan xx
Daniel Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 12:44 AM
Very beautiful scenery after that gloomy weather, nicely done, Jan:)
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 3:38 AM
thanks so much Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 7:53 AM
Enjoy to the utmost the rainbows and “ I’ll just stay at home and go and phone Ma - no visit, but at least we can natter!”
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 3:38 AM
Ive edited the poem and re submitted it - wish I still had mum to visit:-( hugs jan xx
Tor Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Such an awesome experience to see this beauty Jan your words are heartfelt and full of beauty. Thank you for sharing...
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 3:37 AM
thanks Michael for your lovely comment:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 5:12 AM
Jan, a wonderful poem, love the imagery, best of luck in the contest. Hugs
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 3:37 AM
thanks so much Tania:-) hugs jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 4:44 AM
Oh, so precious. Poetry so worthy and worthwhile. I just love this. God bless you always sweet lady. It's a blessing to read your amazing words. love, Gina
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 3:37 AM
I've made a few changes and re submitted it to the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 2:51 AM
- A wonderful poem, Jan (a form I've never tried...looks difficult) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 3:36 AM
its only the second time ive written one Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Bauer Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 1:13 PM
wow! i really admire your ability to tackle these unusual forms and really come up with something pretty amazing, jan!
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 3:06 PM
aww thanks Ilene, I do try new forms if I can xx
Lindley Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 1:03 PM
I fully agree with my friend Lin. You have done this poetry form honor! Very descriptive and a true joy to read. Opening stanza especially struck me as pure gold.. God bless...
Lindley Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 8:25 AM
Well my friend, your writing is poetry and it means a lot to some of us. We are having that fun with you! God bless.
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Thanks Robert, it was a challenge to write for the contest. I will never have your expertise with poetry but I just write and have fun:-)hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 12:04 PM
You've done credit to this form, Jan. With the heat and humidity here today, I'd welcome the showers.
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 12:14 PM
aww thanks Lin, it's the second time I've written this form. I hope Emile likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
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