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Glowing in the sky
Sun smiling with golden rays
Brightening my world

16TH January 2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/28/2015 8:19:00 AM

Great lines with blesed words. Thanks for the magnificient share. I hope the new year is going well so far..

Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 11:51:00 AM

Thanks so much:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 1/20/2015 2:27:00 PM

The Sun and others sure makes the day a little better. I want some sunshine - James :) xx :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2015 2:32:00 PM

Oh Me too James I just want a bit of sun to lift my spirits:-) Hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/20/2015 10:28:00 AM

and reading your poetry brightens mine as well...

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2015 10:47:00 AM

aww Harry you are too kind indeed! Hugs Jan xx

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/18/2015 5:45:00 PM

Real glad I read this one since the sun is rarely here these days. I can't help smiling myself.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/18/2015 6:02:00 PM

Thanks Isaiah - it's been rare to see it at lately so I had to put this into a poem when the sun was shining so brightly on Friday morning - always makes you feel brighter when you see a little sunshine:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2015 5:53:00 AM

It was so good to see that sun yesterday..It has been missed here..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 1/18/2015 8:12:00 AM

I think it brightens our mood and lifts our spirits to get some sunshine - may have to invest in a SAD lamp if these dull days continue lol:-) Hugs jan xxx

Cupids Arrow

Date: 1/17/2015 6:29:00 AM

Nothing finer than to awake to the sunshine..glorious...C--->A

Jan Allison
Date: 1/17/2015 11:45:00 AM

I agree with it happened more often:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/17/2015 12:25:00 AM

Feeling the warmth from here Jan..' Good awareness to share here.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/17/2015 4:13:00 AM

Thanks Joe:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2015 8:24:00 PM

That is what i am waiting for, Jan. the sun of summer shining on me. Strange, but just today joe was saying to me how he hates this gloom of January, one of the worst months of the year. It is one of the few things he and I have in common, our hatred of winter and our love of sunshine days.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/17/2015 4:13:00 AM

I think a lot of people feel down and depressed in January - overspend and bills from Christmas and dark days so seeing the sun is such a joy:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/16/2015 4:31:00 PM

Nothing like a sunny day after horrible weather! Your haiku radiates warmth and joy. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2015 6:07:00 PM

I was so surprised to see the sun i had to write a poem in its honour Paul Lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Shane Cooper

Date: 1/16/2015 2:33:00 PM

I really like it Jan it flows so well. And it has a lovely end, Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2015 6:07:00 PM

Thanks so much Shane:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/16/2015 1:51:00 PM

Gorgeous!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2015 6:06:00 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Armand:-) Love and hugs Jan xxx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/16/2015 12:20:00 PM

It is shining nice and bright today and yes certainly makes the world smile. Lovely haiku. love phyl

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2015 6:06:00 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Phyllis:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/16/2015 9:02:00 AM

nice write Jan, don't forget your sun screen :o)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2015 11:04:00 AM

Oh I wish Robert lol so windy I don't want to be out too long lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/16/2015 8:57:00 AM

Sol would smile at your words of praise. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2015 11:03:00 AM

Thanks Emile:-) Hugs jan xx

David Meade

Date: 1/16/2015 8:30:00 AM

How much more precious is the sun after a dark storm . . . both in nature and in our lives . . . 7 Love and Sunlight always.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2015 8:33:00 AM

Thanks David - I think yesterday was one of the worst storms I've been in since we moved here in 1996 - I could barely stand upright walking back from my parents - at least much it is better today and the sun is shining:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/16/2015 8:10:00 AM

This one has brightened my world as well!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2015 8:14:00 AM

Awww thanks Richard:-) I've not seen the sun for about 5 days its been horrid dull and rainy and 85mph winds yesterday so I had to write this today - just a few fluffy clouds and sunshine:-) Hugs Jan xx

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