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Sunshine

I need help to see A blinding image appears Sun laughing out loud FOR SHARDS OF LIGHT CONTEST

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 10:06:00 PM

I repeat what I said about this one before. It had great imagery!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/11/2010 1:17:00 PM

Great Haiku Faleshia and good luck in Raul's contest.. an amazing photo and u have nailed the description...luv.. Linda-Marie

James Fraser

Date: 4/11/2010 12:34:00 PM

Nice take on the picture in Raul's contest Faleshia, good luck >> James

Date: 4/10/2010 12:40:00 PM

Nice use of personification for an interesting perspective. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a nice weekend. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2010 9:32:00 PM

That ending is pure delight. Sun laughing out loud. AWesome imagery!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/9/2010 6:42:00 PM

enjoyed, that is my theme today

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2010 3:54:00 PM

GOoD LuCK ON ThE SHARDS OF LIGHT CONTEST. THIS ONE PUT A SMILE OF SUNSHINE ON MY FACE