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Sunshine

I need help to see
A blinding image appears
Sun laughing out loud




FOR SHARDS OF LIGHT CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/14/2010 10:06:00 PM
I repeat what I said about this one before. It had great imagery!
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:17:00 PM
Great Haiku Faleshia and good luck in Raul's contest.. an amazing photo and u have nailed the description...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/11/2010 12:34:00 PM
Nice take on the picture in Raul's contest Faleshia, good luck >> James
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Date: 4/10/2010 12:40:00 PM
Nice use of personification for an interesting perspective. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a nice weekend. Karen
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:32:00 PM
That ending is pure delight. Sun laughing out loud. AWesome imagery!!
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Date: 4/9/2010 6:42:00 PM
enjoyed, that is my theme today
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Date: 4/9/2010 4:36:00 PM
Very cool personifying the sun like that....neat twist on the photo.
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Date: 4/9/2010 3:54:00 PM
GOoD LuCK ON ThE SHARDS OF LIGHT CONTEST. THIS ONE PUT A SMILE OF SUNSHINE ON MY FACE
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