Lin Lane Poet Verse

Sunset Shimmers

The sun softly shimmers with gold glimmers  
Sanguine sunsets dance such marvelous minuets 
Turning ruby red, he briefly bled 
'neath stunning skies, it seems as though daylight dies 
Revived, reborn each misty morn 
With radiant rays, he deftly displays 
Dawn's luminous light in flourishing flight 


 
December 3, 2021 ~ Alliterisen 2 Contest  
 Photo #3  ~  Sponsor: Joseph May
Syllable Sequench ~  10-12-9-11-8-10-10
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Jan Allison January 5, 2022 at 5:01 PM I adore stunning sunsets and your poem is a joy to read Lin, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2022 at 11:59 AM So beautiful, Lin. Congrats on your awesome win and Happy New Year to you.

Paula Goldsmith January 1, 2022 at 11:08 AM Back with Congratulations on this win. A beautiful time of day and write. Have a Blessed Day/New Year...........

Joseph May January 1, 2022 at 8:56 AM Beautifully penned Lin, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year!

Paula Goldsmith December 21, 2021 at 10:25 AM Sunset is a beautiful time of day with the many colors. I love the pinks and purples in the sky.  Have a Blessed Christmas ..........................

Caren Krutsinger December 8, 2021 at 8:46 AM I would not know where to start telling you how terrific this one is. I was going to highlight the best lines, but they are ALL the best lines. Lin Lane December 8, 2021 at 8:52 AM How encouraging are your compliments, Caren. I sincerely embrace each one.

Bill Baker December 5, 2021 at 3:54 PM Love the alliteration, Lin good luck in the contest. Bill Lin Lane December 5, 2021 at 4:26 PM Thanks so much for your remarks and hopes of luck, Bill.

Mark Koplin December 3, 2021 at 6:19 PM A beautifully displayed work of art. Great poem Lin! Lin Lane December 4, 2021 at 8:15 AM Thank you so very much, Mark.

Kim Rodrigues December 3, 2021 at 4:43 PM At first read joyous and then a liitle sad, delightfully colorful ~ a beautiful poem, Line! A showstopper and winner in my book! Lin Lane December 4, 2021 at 8:15 AM Kim, I appreciate your insight on the emotions included in this write. Thank you for your comments.

Tom Cunningham December 3, 2021 at 12:23 PM Nothing beats a stunning sunset in all its glory. Another gem from your pen Lin. Tom Lin Lane December 3, 2021 at 3:19 PM Merci, Tom. I always enjoy your comments.

Rico Leffanta December 3, 2021 at 10:16 AM Colourful and beautiful, but what compares with the warmth creeping into our bones from the rising sun? Lin Lane December 3, 2021 at 11:04 AM The warmth of having a loved one beside you. Thanks for commenting, Rico.