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Sunset Shimmers

The sun softly shimmers with gold glimmers Sanguine sunsets dance such marvelous minuets Turning ruby red, he briefly bled 'neath stunning skies, it seems as though daylight dies Revived, reborn each misty morn With radiant rays, he deftly displays Dawn's luminous light in flourishing flight December 3, 2021 ~ Alliterisen 2 Contest Photo #3 ~ Sponsor: Joseph May Syllable Sequench ~ 10-12-9-11-8-10-10 Syllables verified on HowManySyllables Rhyming verified on RhymeZone

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Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2022 5:01:00 PM
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I adore stunning sunsets and your poem is a joy to read Lin, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/1/2022 11:59:00 AM
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So beautiful, Lin. Congrats on your awesome win and Happy New Year to you.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/1/2022 11:08:00 AM
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Back with Congratulations on this win. A beautiful time of day and write. Have a Blessed Day/New Year...........
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Joseph May
Date: 1/1/2022 8:56:00 AM
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Beautifully penned Lin, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/21/2021 10:25:00 AM
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Sunset is a beautiful time of day with the many colors. I love the pinks and purples in the sky.  Have a Blessed Christmas ..........................
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/8/2021 8:46:00 AM
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I would not know where to start telling you how terrific this one is. I was going to highlight the best lines, but they are ALL the best lines.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2021 8:52:00 AM
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How encouraging are your compliments, Caren. I sincerely embrace each one.
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Bill Baker
Date: 12/5/2021 3:54:00 PM
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Love the alliteration, Lin good luck in the contest. Bill
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/5/2021 4:26:00 PM
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Thanks so much for your remarks and hopes of luck, Bill.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/3/2021 6:19:00 PM
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A beautifully displayed work of art. Great poem Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2021 8:15:00 AM
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Thank you so very much, Mark.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2021 4:43:00 PM
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At first read joyous and then a liitle sad, delightfully colorful ~ a beautiful poem, Line! A showstopper and winner in my book!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2021 8:15:00 AM
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Kim, I appreciate your insight on the emotions included in this write. Thank you for your comments.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/3/2021 12:23:00 PM
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Nothing beats a stunning sunset in all its glory. Another gem from your pen Lin. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/3/2021 3:19:00 PM
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Merci, Tom. I always enjoy your comments.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/3/2021 10:16:00 AM
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Colourful and beautiful, but what compares with the warmth creeping into our bones from the rising sun?
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/3/2021 11:04:00 AM
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The warmth of having a loved one beside you. Thanks for commenting, Rico.

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