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From simmer to boil,
an upswelling of passion
as two lovers kiss.
There's such hunger in their eyes.
A rendezvous at sunset.
Let the Pens Flow - Tanka Poetry Contest (Winner: Honorable Mention) Sponsored by Jenish Somadas Date written: 02/20/2020

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Date: 2/25/2020 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/26/2020 5:25:00 AM
Thanks, Eve:-)
Date: 2/25/2020 12:28:00 PM
- Romantic in beautiful sunset, Edward ... congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2020 12:49:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 2/25/2020 9:59:00 AM
Sweet kiss at sunset.. Congrats on your placement Edward..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2020 12:09:00 PM
Thank you for my placement, Jenish:-)
Date: 2/20/2020 10:15:00 PM
Lovely, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/21/2020 5:23:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Line;-)
Date: 2/20/2020 7:10:00 PM
It's a natural image for a kiss...Nice one...Enjoyed this...
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/20/2020 8:14:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo:-)
Date: 2/20/2020 6:01:00 PM
Very nice Edward :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/20/2020 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi:-)
Date: 2/20/2020 4:26:00 PM
Passion well painted, Edward: simmer to boil...hunger in their eyes!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/20/2020 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay:-)

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