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The scarlet sea is almost calm tonight. The sinking sun splashes its fiery rays over the billowing flame-tinged waves as red-stained sails stretch full to catch the lively saltatory breeze and meander their surest way back to their safest sanctuary. Aloft the snow-capped mountains send a few rumbles of an impending storm. Fleecy clouds race one another as swallows play their last undaunted game before the tranquil day comes to a close. Is not this a sunset of wonder? A time when suddenly you feel you're not alone? For all around is nature unaffected, clean and pure, a blazing beauty so rare that somehow, to me, it spells there's something more those rules that guard and guide the universe in its heavenly melodious motion, a singing of harmonious mellifluous cords that urges man to free himself from wanton worldly cares, and give himself more an intimate relationship with the One who created all. Is it but a passing moment? Or should I strive to capture that one fleeting heavenly rapture, an urge of fleeting tender compassion, and give heartfelt thanks to my Almighty Lord?

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Date: 6/25/2023 12:41:00 PM
Some sunsets do stand out and while all of them are a joy, one such as this would linger in the spirit for awhile, I believe; well done.
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Date: 6/20/2023 3:52:00 PM
A poet through and through, so romantic, praising the one who gives us beauty and saves our souls!
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Date: 6/20/2023 1:14:00 PM
I love gorgeous sunsets and wow, you described this time of day amazingly
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Date: 6/20/2023 4:50:00 AM
Awesome, makes my heart jubilant reading this:)
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Date: 6/20/2023 1:36:00 AM
Lovely poetry Victor, we should give heartfelt thanks to the Lord, His amazing sunsets are a blessing and a gift to us all… Belle
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Date: 6/19/2023 8:42:00 PM
This is a lovely poem.... first rate poetry. I feel that I am in a heavenly setting . So evident that this is written in a tranquil mood in an ecstatic state of mind. Into my FAVE dear Victor
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Date: 6/19/2023 8:13:00 PM
It is stunning , the imagery outstanding, the middle verse full of emotion. the third verse,,,, bless is he who is under the caress of the Lord. hugs eve
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Date: 6/19/2023 3:25:00 PM
Victor, your poem is a stunning masterpiece, akin to witnessing the beauty of a sunset through your exquisite depictions. I took great pleasure in reading it.
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Date: 6/19/2023 2:04:00 PM
Victor, gorgeous imagery, beautifully penned.
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Date: 6/19/2023 12:24:00 PM
In that sunset of wonder you never cease to amaze me the older you get the more golden your poem become, love xo
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Date: 6/19/2023 10:12:00 AM
God's grace is captured in the beautiful, scarlet sunset, creating thankful hearts and praises to the Lord. Simply lovely, Victor. :)
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Date: 6/19/2023 7:53:00 AM
Beautiful: those rules that guard and guide the universe in its heavenly melodious motion, a singing of harmonious mellifluous cords that urges man to free himself from wanton worldly cares! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 6/19/2023 5:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Victor--like watching the sunset through your splendid descriptions. Much enjoyed.
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Date: 6/19/2023 5:31:00 AM
Amen Victor what lovely Poetry you have shared with us, sharing Gods beautiful creation, giving notice to his brilliant abilities to create such picturesque beauty by just speaking. It is hard to fathom, but that is his greatness. I am in awe of him Jesus of Nazareth Who is and is to come. This one is a favorite Victor because I find myself always praising him when I see the beauty of his Creation. Your words Honor him, and covey a message , we should all appreciate his creative ability...
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Date: 6/19/2023 4:12:00 AM
Yes, those times are awesome. I enjoy sunrises, sunsets and so many other times of wonder each day. Yesterday the sun was a very bright orange when it was just above the horizon and the day before it was red, a brilliant red, alas, today we have lightning flashing across the sky. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara..
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Date: 6/19/2023 2:09:00 AM
- We have so much to be grateful for... a lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 6/19/2023 2:03:00 AM
oh wow Victor you have captured this picture so brilliantly the imagery is exquisite, adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/19/2023 1:19:00 AM
Beautiful - Yes, Thank the Lord - Thank Him for it all, the beauty and the hope, all the love that we have known. Beautiful. God bless you Victor. Love, Gina
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