Sunset Horizon

Windswept
  Voyagers sail
     Across sunset's 
        Amber horizon.

Billowing breeze
  Spawns crested waves,
     Crashing ashore.



September 21, 2020
Paint A Picture - 7 Lines
Sponsored by Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Callus Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 8:24 AM
You offer a lovely picture, Jenna; even the 'sail' shape is worthy of notice. Congratulations on your high flying win! Regards // paul
Proxenos Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 4:56 AM
Jenna late with my congrats on your top win but congratulations with all my heart - a wonderful poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Watt Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 9:11 AM
Beautiful imagery of sailing in just seven lines, Jenna. Congrats on your top win ~ John
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:29 AM
Back to say congrats Jenna!{} Linda
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:08 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 4:15 AM
Lovely scene Jenna, Congrats on your win..
Fowler Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 11:19 AM
Beautiful Jenna! The pirates life for me! Fair winds in the contest :) Linda
Logan Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 3:58 AM
lol Thanks so much, Linda.
Proxenos Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 5:52 AM
Beautiful Jenna, somehow it created a visions of adventurers, Christopher Columbus Vasco Da Gama and others setting sail to unknown lands crashing ashore. I Loved the poem - best of luck in the contest Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Logan Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 6:49 AM
Your comments always leave me smiling, Thanks so much, Jennifer.
Fowler Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 6:13 AM
Another beautiful reference to the seas Jenna. Very lovely. GL in th contest! Linda
Logan Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 6:48 AM
Thank you for the comments and wishes of luck, Linda.
Koplin Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 7:14 AM
A beauty you have painted Jenna! Great poem!
Logan Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Thanks ever so kindly, Mark.
Cunningham Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 10:38 PM
You've painted a stunning image with your words Jenna, Hope alls well, good luck Tom
Logan Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 4:03 AM
All is well with me, Tom. Thanks for asking and for liking my sunset.
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