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Sunset At Champlain Lookout

mirrored dying light of day rivers red blood veins dissect the scene 01/19/19 For Kim Rodrigues' Bring Color Back Into My World Poetry Contest

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Bernard Chan

Date: 1/29/2019 6:20:00 PM

Uber-cool imagery :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/30/2019 7:49:00 AM

Thank you! Took me over twenty years to write ;p xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/22/2019 3:17:00 PM

Vivid imagery of a blood red sunset!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/23/2019 9:21:00 AM

Thank you Michelle :) xomo!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/20/2019 9:28:00 PM

wonderful monoku

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/21/2019 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Mahtab :) xomo!

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 1/20/2019 4:26:00 PM

Oh love this...I see it.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/21/2019 8:37:00 AM

Thank you Vickie :))) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2019 3:02:00 PM

very vivid imagery, Maureen. I'm seeing a lot of good work in these monoku at Soup this week.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/21/2019 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :) xomo

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/20/2019 12:25:00 PM

wow, so descriptive! great job, maureen...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/20/2019 1:06:00 PM

Thank you Ilene! :) xomo

Sathya Babu

Date: 1/20/2019 5:27:00 AM

Marueen, A very nice one Liner... Regards, Sathya

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/20/2019 8:21:00 AM

Thank you Sathya :) xomo

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/20/2019 3:11:00 AM

Beautiful! :) :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/20/2019 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Arthur :)) xomo!

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2019 3:19:00 PM

Ooooh... i see it was a graphic sunset..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/19/2019 11:07:00 PM

It was! Gawd, seared in my memory, over twenty years ago. 'Bout time it got a poem ;) xomo

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/19/2019 3:00:00 PM

WoW! Maureen, Your one-liners always say a lot in a few words. Well done. I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/19/2019 11:05:00 PM

Thank you Alexis! Been called a word economist, less boring than a wordy economist ;o) Fingers crossed... xomo!

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/19/2019 2:19:00 PM

Lovely layers to this poem, Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/19/2019 10:58:00 PM

Thank you Line :) xomo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/19/2019 1:34:00 PM

from dark to red, what a transformation, maureen...spectacular monoku... huggs

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/19/2019 10:57:00 PM

Thank you Nette! <3 that sunset's been waiting years for a poem ;) xomo