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Sunset At Champlain Lookout

mirrored dying light of day   rivers red blood veins dissect the scene





01/19/19

For Kim Rodrigues'
Bring Color Back Into My World Poetry Contest

riversunsetmonoku

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Bernard Chan

January 29, 2019 at 6:20 PM

Uber-cool imagery :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 30, 2019 at 7:49 AM

Thank you! Took me over twenty years to write ;p xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

January 22, 2019 at 3:17 PM

Vivid imagery of a blood red sunset!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 23, 2019 at 9:21 AM

Thank you Michelle :) xomo!

Mahtab Bangalee

January 20, 2019 at 9:28 PM

wonderful monoku

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 21, 2019 at 8:38 AM

Thank you Mahtab :) xomo!

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

January 20, 2019 at 4:26 PM

Oh love this...I see it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 21, 2019 at 8:37 AM

Thank you Vickie :))) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2019 at 3:02 PM

very vivid imagery, Maureen. I'm seeing a lot of good work in these monoku at Soup this week.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 21, 2019 at 8:36 AM

Thank you Andrea :) xomo

Ilene Bauer

January 20, 2019 at 12:25 PM

wow, so descriptive! great job, maureen...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 20, 2019 at 1:06 PM

Thank you Ilene! :) xomo

Sathya Babu

January 20, 2019 at 5:27 AM

Marueen, A very nice one Liner... Regards, Sathya

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 20, 2019 at 8:21 AM

Thank you Sathya :) xomo

Arthur Vaso

January 20, 2019 at 3:11 AM

Beautiful! :) :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 20, 2019 at 8:18 AM

Thank you Arthur :)) xomo!

Silent One

January 19, 2019 at 3:19 PM

Ooooh... i see it was a graphic sunset..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 19, 2019 at 11:07 PM

It was! Gawd, seared in my memory, over twenty years ago. 'Bout time it got a poem ;) xomo

Alexis Y.

January 19, 2019 at 3:00 PM

WoW! Maureen, Your one-liners always say a lot in a few words. Well done. I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 19, 2019 at 11:05 PM

Thank you Alexis! Been called a word economist, less boring than a wordy economist ;o) Fingers crossed... xomo!