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Sunset Bedtime

SUNSET BEDTIME The sunset kisses the ocean’s fragrant lips of salt, Lapping ‘neath the sky’s purple veil and vault. In perfumed mellow waters, in their glory golden, Deep sighs the sun, great lazy yellow melon. Glowing, flowing his way to rest, down drawn To make love to the sleep-hazed horizon: Their golden bed where fused desires deep End in surging final flare-out - and then sleep. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written 18 July 2012 by Sydney Peck Entered in Francine Roberts’s Contest Top five Sunsets

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/29/2012 10:15:00 PM
SIDNEY, a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in Francine Roberts' contest... these are some nice winning poems in her "Top five Sunsets" ... always~ PD
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Date: 7/27/2012 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Top Five Sunsets" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:53:00 AM
Once a gain congratulations Sidney it could have doubled in the colours contest and been a double whammy love it xx
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Date: 7/25/2012 11:05:00 PM
wow, for me it's one of the best for sure! Congrats in the contest, Sidney.
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Date: 7/25/2012 11:05:00 PM
love the lazy yellow melon.
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:17:00 PM
A lovely, tranquil scene! Congrats, Sidney. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/25/2012 3:48:00 PM
ahhhh very Shakespearian? Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 7/25/2012 12:55:00 PM
Congradulations on your well deserved win! This poem is amazing! Jane XoXo
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Date: 7/25/2012 11:31:00 AM
Well said and a winner. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/25/2012 10:48:00 AM
Sydney super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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Date: 7/25/2012 10:37:00 AM
KC, this is incredible!... you slammed it; congrats!..:)huggs!
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:39:00 AM
congrats on your Honorable Mention Syd, great job ( and which is it really? Sid or Syd?)
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Sidney Beck
Date: 7/25/2012 12:21:00 PM
Thanks vry much Francine...a great challenging contest....by the way it is S Y D....best wishes
Date: 7/20/2012 10:02:00 PM
Pretty shmaltzy.. sounds nice! Namaste~N
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