Sunset

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A lovely photo from a friend ignited this haiku

lemon zest sunset bursting with vitamin C — Winter’s eve relief 2/18/2018

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S. Wesley Mcgranor

Date: 2/19/2018 3:40:00 PM

Glorious!

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/19/2018 12:59:00 PM

Delightful, Kim. Yes, we certainly crave that visual vitamin C that's warm to the skin. Charming, well done.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/19/2018 6:49:00 AM

Imagery well captured..clever use of words..vitamin C and winter relief!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/19/2018 5:03:00 AM

A great description of the sunset in haiku ,one of natures wonders. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thank you, Tom!

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/19/2018 4:39:00 AM

This is lovely...Very nice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2018 7:31:00 AM

Thanks, Arturo!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2018 1:47:00 AM

- Too little vitamin C intake during winter time in Norway ... dark and too little sun ... - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2018 7:30:00 AM

Hugs to you and hopes that you will warm up soon :) Kim