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Sunset

sunset by the bay
        shifting colors in the sky
               spectacular show









30 June 2015
Traditional Haiku Contest
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton




*Image of Sunset by Manila Bay credit to Elmer R. Pedrezuela skyscraper.com

Copyright © Kp Nunez | Year Posted 2015

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Jack Ellison Date: 7/4/2015 6:13:00 AM So this is what I've been missing... shame on me! It's a winner... Santa once again says "sorry"! Love from Canada xxxx Login to Reply

Cona Adams Date: 7/2/2015 7:33:00 AM Great Haiku, Kim. Thanks. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/2/2015 12:01:00 AM lovely, a sunset can bring so much inspiration, enjoyed this... good luck in the contest *luv, p.d. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/1/2015 8:38:00 PM You got the idea of the 2 parts,work on the cut to line 3 Kim, now your line 3 redefines what you have already told us in lines 1 & 2 - bring in a different sense ex: a lone gull crying- Light & Love Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/1/2015 1:57:00 PM - Dear Kim, thank you for this really beautiful picture (7!!!!) - and congrats on your win !!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/1/2015 4:22:00 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning haiku Kim! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/1/2015 12:53:00 AM Kim, congratulations on your Traditional Haiku win. Love LINDA Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 7/1/2015 12:31:00 AM Sit down with a long, cool drink and watch your wonderful Haiku, Kim. Well done. Viv x Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/1/2015 12:10:00 AM Kim, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 6/30/2015 9:17:00 PM You stuck to the 5 7 5 form which is all to the good. Also you positioned your sentences in an interesting manner in this work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/30/2015 8:32:00 PM Beautiful haiku, dear Kim! Congratulations on a wonderful win! Pandita Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 6/30/2015 8:01:00 PM A lovely haiku, Kim! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Darlene Gifford Date: 6/30/2015 7:13:00 PM Hi, I liked your sunset poem. Good luck in the contest. ~~Darlene Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 6/30/2015 6:59:00 PM ENCORE!! ENCORE!!! Good job Kim - CURTAIN CALL----APPLAUSE...congrats. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 6/30/2015 4:50:00 PM Kim, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 6/30/2015 4:19:00 PM Indeed a spectacular show, Kim!!...and a spectacular showing in the contest, too:) Congratulations on a most lovely win. hugs // paul Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/30/2015 3:56:00 PM Enjoyed reading your descriptive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/30/2015 1:11:00 PM Very pretty picture you showed us! Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/30/2015 1:08:00 PM lovely haiku Kim congrats on 5th place hugs Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/30/2015 1:03:00 PM Shifting colors...that is a spectacular show, dear. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 6/30/2015 10:36:00 AM Gorgeous Picture... gorgeous Haiku! You Canadian friend, Jack xxx Login to Reply