Kp Nunez Poet Haiku

Sunset

sunset by the bay
        shifting colors in the sky
               spectacular show









30 June 2015
Traditional Haiku Contest
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton




*Image of Sunset by Manila Bay credit to Elmer R. Pedrezuela skyscraper.com

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Jack Ellison July 4, 2015 at 6:13 AM So this is what I've been missing... shame on me! It's a winner... Santa once again says "sorry"! Love from Canada xxxx

Cona Adams July 2, 2015 at 7:33 AM Great Haiku, Kim. Thanks.

Poet Destroyer A July 2, 2015 at 12:01 AM lovely, a sunset can bring so much inspiration, enjoyed this... good luck in the contest *luv, p.d.

Debbie Guzzi July 1, 2015 at 8:38 PM You got the idea of the 2 parts,work on the cut to line 3 Kim, now your line 3 redefines what you have already told us in lines 1 & 2 - bring in a different sense ex: a lone gull crying- Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2015 at 1:57 PM - Dear Kim, thank you for this really beautiful picture (7!!!!) - and congrats on your win !!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 1, 2015 at 4:22 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning haiku Kim!

Poet Destroyer A July 1, 2015 at 12:53 AM Kim, congratulations on your Traditional Haiku win. Love LINDA

Viv Wigley July 1, 2015 at 12:31 AM Sit down with a long, cool drink and watch your wonderful Haiku, Kim. Well done. Viv x

Skat A July 1, 2015 at 12:10 AM Kim, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE

Matthew Anish June 30, 2015 at 9:17 PM You stuck to the 5 7 5 form which is all to the good. Also you positioned your sentences in an interesting manner in this work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Pandita Sietesantos June 30, 2015 at 8:32 PM Beautiful haiku, dear Kim! Congratulations on a wonderful win! Pandita

Kim Merryman June 30, 2015 at 8:01 PM A lovely haiku, Kim! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Kim

Darlene Gifford June 30, 2015 at 7:13 PM Hi, I liked your sunset poem. Good luck in the contest. ~~Darlene

John Lawless June 30, 2015 at 6:59 PM ENCORE!! ENCORE!!! Good job Kim - CURTAIN CALL----APPLAUSE...congrats.

Eve Roper June 30, 2015 at 4:50 PM Kim, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus June 30, 2015 at 4:19 PM Indeed a spectacular show, Kim!!...and a spectacular showing in the contest, too:) Congratulations on a most lovely win. hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick June 30, 2015 at 3:56 PM Enjoyed reading your descriptive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Andrea Dietrich June 30, 2015 at 1:11 PM Very pretty picture you showed us!

Shadow Hamilton June 30, 2015 at 1:08 PM lovely haiku Kim congrats on 5th place hugs

Eileen Manassian June 30, 2015 at 1:03 PM Shifting colors...that is a spectacular show, dear. Good luck in the contest. Hugs

Jack Ellison June 30, 2015 at 10:36 AM Gorgeous Picture... gorgeous Haiku! You Canadian friend, Jack xxx