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Sunset

Brilliant orange hues danced fervently, igniting all in sight; the horizon was ablaze. As a sapphire tide gently began to gently beckon for the crimson fire to subside; dying embers bid the day goodnight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/10/2010 12:07:00 PM
that is some very impressive imagery i would love to see what you could do to a narritve poem! great write i loved that last bit. =)
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Date: 1/30/2010 3:38:00 PM
excellent imagery. keep going! ------Ell
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