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Jan.19. 2025

Short Form Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Brian Strand

sun has tripped over,
upturning a pail of paint~
color permeates

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2025 5:10:00 AM

Good one. I enjoyed reading your creativeness this morning. I wonder if my memory banks will load it in. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/20/2025 8:17:00 PM

Dazzling!

Ish Snow

Date: 1/20/2025 3:41:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2025 11:40:00 PM

Oh and congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2025 11:14:00 PM

Love this, Valsa

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/19/2025 4:28:00 PM

Dear Valsa, your bright, tactile, visually captivating visuals and natural personification of "sun has tripped over" catch the spirit of a brilliant sunset. I love using a shattered bucket of paint to depict how the sunset sky is like a mosaic of colors.

Crystol Woods

Date: 1/19/2025 12:23:00 PM

Yess! I love this! It's very witty and joyful. A happy accident that produced this grand sky in your photo! Your mind is a beautiful place Valsa! Xo

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/19/2025 10:32:00 AM

Beautiful imagery which brings this picture to life

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/19/2025 9:14:00 AM

This is a marvelous Haiku, Valsa and a fun personification of a setting sun. Hugs, SuZ

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/19/2025 8:16:00 AM

Dearest Valsa, soulful poetess, your wonderful poetic finesse captures the essence of a vibrantly colored sunset with vivid, tactile, visually striking imagery and sun personification "sun has tripped over" -wow! I adore the use of a spilled bucket of paint to express the widespread color soaking the sky at sunset and that the sky is like a mural showcasing the colors. A beautiful pageant of hues to behold. Warmest wishes my sweet poet friend.. ~Susan

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 1/19/2025 2:53:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2025 2:43:00 AM

- Beautiful sunset, Valsa :) - Enjoy your haiku :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Happy Sunday :) - hugs