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Sunset

The sun is setting, golden and low, and as twilight shadows quietly pass the old man hurries but his pace is slow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 1/17/2025 10:11:00 AM
Love this one! Time isn't the same for everyone.
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Date: 12/29/2024 8:24:00 PM
I just like the feel and the pace of this short piece, Akham. So resonant. ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/28/2024 12:34:00 PM
I can relate ~ I try to hurry but can never quite match what I used to achieve. So be it ! Happy New Year, Akham!
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