Sunset

I stood alone waiting for the splendor,
  gazing west at the appointed hour,
  watching the great orb
  behind distant clouds, 
  moving at its own pace, marking its own time.

When I arrived, gray was the color
  at horizon's line, 
  where water and atmosphere kiss.

The ocean reflecting off its salty surface, 
  nature's mirror, about to be placed 
  in sunset's drawer,
  made horizon's line fuzzy.

Minute by minute color shifted.

Imperceptible change of warmer
  color brought cooler air
  to the growing crowd around me.

A silent battle of night and day 
  raged before my eyes,
  each seeking dominance.

And then day's blood slowly
  turned the sky to pale pink.

Night's victory was applauded 
  by the large gathering, 
  as gray slowly succumbed--
  replaced by brilliant red.

Moments later day's free-flowing
  blood lost its splendor.
  Its life waned,
  with ever deeper shades.

Darkness traveled quickly from
  the east covering the sea,
  overtaking me,
  while another day breathed its last.

I returned to my car with the others,
  mourning the loss of a friend,
  a day I would never see again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Hello Gerald Greene, so nice to meet you. I love sunsets. they are beautiful to see. I like the way it looks shining in the water. have a nice evening my friend.
Greene Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Yes, they are a special gift at the end of the day. Thank you.
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