Sunset

sunset's reprise of waves clashing against a cliff ~ the passing of time Submitted on May 21, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 3, MAY 2019 NATURE HAIKU sponsored by DEAR HEART - RANKED 2ND

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/30/2019 4:51:00 PM

You have forced me to "fav" this one...beautiful.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2019 10:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, ML, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2019 9:52:00 PM

Great image, Line, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2019 10:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve.

Constance La France

Date: 5/27/2019 9:45:00 AM

Line congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku !

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/27/2019 2:18:00 PM

Thanks, Constance. It was a fun contest as always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2019 3:01:00 PM

Yes, we can liken this to life. Good comparison, Line. Congrats for your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2019 3:47:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2019 1:58:00 PM

- Returns with a congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2019 3:47:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/24/2019 9:12:00 AM

I am seeing a theme, and I like it a lot, Line. For it makes sense.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2019 10:00:00 AM

Thanks, Caren.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2019 5:18:00 AM

- Very well done, Line - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2019 8:42:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment/

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/24/2019 5:16:00 AM

A beautiful haiku, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2019 8:42:00 AM

Thanks, Tania. Much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/23/2019 9:02:00 PM

Can just see it Line each time it breaks on the cliff it's time passed. Soup mail. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2019 8:43:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. Much appreciate your visit under the Kefalonia sun.

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/23/2019 7:59:00 PM

Living here brings your muse to life Line, best wishes, Aloha wk

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 8:10:00 PM

Hawaiian sunsets ! My muse would be on fire too. I can dream. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, William.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/23/2019 6:43:00 PM

You have such an uncanny, metaphorical knack of presenting concepts via nature. Lovely!! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 7:20:00 PM

Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/23/2019 6:17:00 PM

Nicely penned Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 7:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Allen.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/23/2019 10:36:00 AM

contemplative write, dear Line... excellent as always. :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, PS.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/23/2019 9:54:00 AM

Love the imagery! Monotonous and almost like banging one’s head against the wall...time moving slow, rhythmic, etc..

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 11:03:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim. Sometimes a little headbanging is needed. LOL

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/23/2019 9:16:00 AM

Erosion, in the dying light; gorgeous, powerful imagery Line. This, a winner for me, my best to you in the contest :) xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 9:52:00 AM

I appreciate your lovely compliment, Maureen. Thanks.