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Sunset

sunset's reprise of
waves clashing against a cliff
~ the passing of time



Submitted on May 21, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 3, MAY 2019 NATURE HAIKU sponsored by DEAR HEART  -  RANKED 2ND

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M. L. Kiser Date: 5/30/2019 4:51:00 PM You have forced me to "fav" this one...beautiful. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/30/2019 10:36:00 PM Thank you so much, ML, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Eve Roper Date: 5/27/2019 9:52:00 PM Great image, Line, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/30/2019 10:37:00 PM Thank you so much, Eve.

Constance La France Date: 5/27/2019 9:45:00 AM Line congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku ! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/27/2019 2:18:00 PM Thanks, Constance. It was a fun contest as always.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/26/2019 3:01:00 PM Yes, we can liken this to life. Good comparison, Line. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/26/2019 3:47:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/26/2019 1:58:00 PM - Returns with a congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/26/2019 3:47:00 PM Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/24/2019 9:12:00 AM I am seeing a theme, and I like it a lot, Line. For it makes sense. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2019 10:00:00 AM Thanks, Caren.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/24/2019 5:18:00 AM - Very well done, Line - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2019 8:42:00 AM Thank you, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment/

Tania Kitchin Date: 5/24/2019 5:16:00 AM A beautiful haiku, Line! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2019 8:42:00 AM Thanks, Tania. Much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/23/2019 9:02:00 PM Can just see it Line each time it breaks on the cliff it's time passed. Soup mail. Tom Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2019 8:43:00 AM Thanks, Tom. Much appreciate your visit under the Kefalonia sun.

Hilo Poet Date: 5/23/2019 7:59:00 PM Living here brings your muse to life Line, best wishes, Aloha wk Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/23/2019 8:10:00 PM Hawaiian sunsets ! My muse would be on fire too. I can dream. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, William.

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/23/2019 6:43:00 PM You have such an uncanny, metaphorical knack of presenting concepts via nature. Lovely!! :) gw Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/23/2019 7:20:00 PM Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 5/23/2019 6:17:00 PM Nicely penned Line Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/23/2019 7:20:00 PM Thank you so much, Allen.

P.S. Awtry Date: 5/23/2019 10:36:00 AM contemplative write, dear Line... excellent as always. :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/23/2019 11:02:00 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, PS.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/23/2019 9:54:00 AM Love the imagery! Monotonous and almost like banging one’s head against the wall...time moving slow, rhythmic, etc.. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/23/2019 11:03:00 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim. Sometimes a little headbanging is needed. LOL

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/23/2019 9:16:00 AM Erosion, in the dying light; gorgeous, powerful imagery Line. This, a winner for me, my best to you in the contest :) xomo Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/23/2019 9:52:00 AM I appreciate your lovely compliment, Maureen. Thanks.