Sunset

Sunset’s smile fades as it paints
The bellies of evening clouds
Before drawing dusky shades
And retiring for the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashley Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 2:34 PM
The beauty of the sunset is as mesmerizing as it is inspiring and your glowing poem reflects this wonderfully, David. Simply stunning poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Such lovely sunset imagery in so few lines, David. I enjoyed reading your poem. Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Lovely imagery, David. Congrats on your win.
Roper Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 3:41 PM
Congratulations on your win, David.. hugs Eve ~`*
Gorelick Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 5:27 PM
I like short poems, really like this one.. paints a lovely picture. BG
Michael Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Until the break of day...Nice Imagery
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