Sunset

Sunset’s smile fades as it paints The bellies of evening clouds Before drawing dusky shades And retiring for the night.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 5/14/2019 2:34:00 PM

The beauty of the sunset is as mesmerizing as it is inspiring and your glowing poem reflects this wonderfully, David. Simply stunning poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/27/2019 7:39:00 PM

Such lovely sunset imagery in so few lines, David. I enjoyed reading your poem. Sandra

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2019 6:35:00 PM

Lovely imagery, David. Congrats on your win.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/12/2019 3:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, David.. hugs Eve ~`*

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/11/2019 5:27:00 PM

I like short poems, really like this one.. paints a lovely picture. BG

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/11/2019 2:29:00 PM

Until the break of day...Nice Imagery