Sunrise To Sunset Shadows

Sunrise mingles with the clouds
     Casting shadows on the hills
          As song birds break the silence
               With their melodic morning trills.

Spring rain has now subsided
     And flowers open in full bloom.
          Ivy clings to the patio pergola
               As weaving shadows softly loom.

Ficus spread their shadow shade
     Underneath the noon day sun
          And the school bell rings and
               It's lunchtime meals for everyone.

Shadows form a second set of
     Monkey bars as the children play.
          The library across the street
               Shades a bench in front display.

Sunset casts its twilight shadows
     On draping trees in silhouette
          And birds return to their cozy limbs
               To roost as the skies turn violet.

Twilight is the most enchanting...
     With a full moon and the starlight.
          Coqui frogs begin to sing with crickets
               'Neath shadowed trees in soft moonlight.

2-23-22

A Lovely Day Poetry Contest~First Place~
Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley



First posted 5-9-20
BRIAN'S CHOICE B,any form,any theme ~First Place~
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:10 PM
Back with Congratulations on this new win. So beautiful. Enjoy your win and day with blessings........
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations Connie on your first-place poem <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 10:44 AM
Thank you very much for my first placement B.J. I feel very honored to receive such a high placement. You have a wonderful week. Blessings xxoo
May Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Beautifully written Connie, Soupmail...
Schneiter Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 12:01 PM
Your poem is a model of "painting a picture with words." The whole scene comes alive under your descriptive pen. It's easy to see why it received the honor of first place. Congratulations! Hugs, Paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 5:56 PM
Thank you very much Paul. There is so much beauty on this earth to appreciate. One just needs to take notice. Blessings xxoo
Parker Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 6:00 PM
the enchantment of shadows rendering the world around gives a place of space and time, very descriptive Connie...love this poem
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 1:59 PM
Thank you very much Frederic. I appreciate your wonderful comment my friend. xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 2:02 AM
Connie you have the ability and the poetic flair to bring your poems to life as you have this one. Truly beautiful. I love it and is a fav for me. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:54 AM
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment Jennifer. I really appreciate it and also the Fave. Blessings xxoo
Laurie Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Hello Connie … its like a day in a botanic garden enjoying the blending a piece of the world of nature - very good indeed Connie - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:55 AM
Thank you very much Lindsay. Our clouds here in Hawaii make for dramatic shadows. Blessings xxoo
Ligon Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 10:57 AM
Ooh, this is lovely. Great imagery.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:55 AM
Thank you very much Juliet. Blessings xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 3:59 PM
Well worth reading again. Blessings Rick.
Callus Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations on placing first, Connie! You enchant with beautiful descriptive images. Warm regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Thank you Paul. I wrote this for the shadow contest but it closed before I could enter it. I am very happy I got to put it in Brian’s contest. xxoo
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations Connie, A wonderful days work indeed...
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Thank you Charlie. xxoo
Rose  Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 6:48 AM
You have a beautiful wide range of words that are new and fresh, mingled with your talent it creates quite a nice view for us. Your one of the best poets here Connie, always a pleasure to read you, Have a great day, stay healthy, and productive xo
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 3:17 PM
I appreciate your knowledge nd comment Vie. I feel the same way about you. I love reading your poetry. Thank you very much my friend. Blessings xxoo
Faulkner Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 8:58 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lyrical ode to the passing of day to evening-
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 3:18 PM
Shadows play musical chairs with the day into high Michelle and they inspired this poem. Thank you very much. Blessings xxoo
Goldsmith Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your paint brush was a pen. So beautiful. Enjoy your win and day........
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Thank you very much Paula. I wrote this for a contest that closed before I could enter it. Blessings Paula. xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 6:45 AM
Connie, this is written in the style of Shakespeare, Coleridge and Thoreau - in the very utmost romantical, image-filled, exquisite ways of the old masters, and I am not calling you old!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 4:46 PM
Wow Caren, that is one of the most wonderful comments I have ever received! Thank you so much. I am honored. Blessings xxoo
Vangaveti Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 11:16 PM
I saw nature's beauty,, I heard nature's music and tasted every word of this poem!! Thanks for posting such a wonderful piece. Love :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 4:47 PM
I am happy you enjoyed it Swetha. Thank you very much. xxoo
Ball Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 10:57 AM
What beautiful description Connie. Reminds me of long ago when I listened to those frogs and crickets in the evening. Great job. God Bless, JB
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 6:12 PM
You do get used to the sounds when you live there. Thank you Judy. xxoo
Gentile Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 9:33 AM
Connie, I love the weaving of sunrise and sunset in the stanzas which so cohesively tell the story and set the images to mind. Congratulations on your top honors xxoo
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 4:51 PM
Thank you very much Mike. I wrote this for Chantelle's contest but I didn't get it entered in time before it closed. I was happy I got to enter it in Brian's contest. Blessings xxoo
Koplin Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 9:17 AM
Your rhyme is brilliant. Such a beautiful flow and use of words. Congrats on 1st place. Well deserved!
Gaul Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Connie, your rhyming skills and observant nature musings are on full display here for all to see and laud most appropriately. Splashy skills fill the page, your first place win, all the rage!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 7:09 AM
I can see why this received first place. I feel peaceful reading it. Congratulations Connie. Hugs Rick
Pandit Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 7:07 AM
Wonderful imagery my friend from daybreak to dusk. You paint a painting on nature's canvas. Congrats on your first place win, Connie.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 4:53 PM
Thank you Vijay. I consider you one of the best poets here that makes imagery come alive, so I am very honored by your comment. Blessings xxoo
Idudje Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 1:58 AM
Interesting Superb Sublime Bravo On your First place win
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 3:02 AM
Thank you very much Gideon. I appreciate your lovely comment. Aloha
Mishra Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 1:54 AM
This is so picturesque Connie! I can relive each phase from sunrise to sunset and I agree twilight is the most enchanting with a full moon and starlight. Also because at twilight I suppose all of us have those few seconds when we reflect on ourselves and delve deep inside our hearts, the brief escape from the world. Love it :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 3:00 AM
I agree. That soft light at twilight is a time when we may reflect on our thoughts and dreams. Thank you very much. I see you are rather new to Poetry Soup. A warm welcome! Aloha, Connie
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Such incredible imagery in each stanza with a wonderful flow to your lines, I especially love the 5th stanza, into my faves - this is pure poetry Connie a delight to read today:-) hugs jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 11:02 PM
Wow Jan, what a wonderful comment! I so appreciate that you enjoyed my poem and the fave. You honor me with your words. Blessings, Connie xxoo
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