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Sunrise Melody

Sunrise melody, suddenly the curtain’s up; Drums lead the intro, violin softly chimes in; A rhythmic awakening.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/24/2023 3:21:00 PM
This is a great Tanka Melani. Lovely poetic choice of words. Love the title and following lines that depict it so well.I especially love the last line,’A rhythmic awakening’. Beautiful ! Thank you for sharing. :)
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 9/24/2023 5:33:00 PM
You are more than welcome. Thank you for the feedback! I enjoyed writing it. :)

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