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Andrea Dietrich's Alouette Me Contest...submitted 22 Nov 24

Glows the sunrise...fair blooms wake to prepare tunes of smiles drifting away- spouses arm in arm celebrate light's charm, when God's blessings pour this day. Rise the songs of dawn, pure as mist on lawn kids laugh, echoing above- while clouds draped in blue glow through sunday's hue , hearth- kisses divine...it's love.

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Lyric Man

Date: 5/17/2025 7:54:00 AM

One of my favs.. Inspired a Sunset in Love

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/7/2025 10:12:00 PM

Nothing better than love --- nothing. ~ gw

Liza Ortiz

Date: 1/7/2025 4:03:00 PM

beautiful

Christine Watts

Date: 12/4/2024 10:42:00 PM

Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in this contest. Your words encourage the dawn and all it brings nicely written Cheers Christine

JCB Brul

Date: 12/4/2024 7:41:00 AM

So lovely! It gracefully captures a serene morning ambience with spiritual touch. Congratulations on top win. This goes to my faves. ^___^ JCB

Paul Callus

Date: 12/4/2024 4:54:00 AM

Love is definitely in the air, Nette!! Enjoyed the content and the rhyme pattern. Congratulations on your top placement, my friend. Hugs // paul

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/3/2024 5:06:00 AM

Wow! Congrats, Kabayan! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from start 'til the end. God bless you.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/3/2024 2:34:00 AM

"hearth- kisses divine...it's love"—love" compressed in a capsule. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2024 10:50:00 PM

Congrats dear friend. You got a first place this time A really awesome entry about love that goes on and on

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/2/2024 9:12:00 PM

Congratulations on this charming, romantic piece. Blessing to you!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/2/2024 8:34:00 PM

enchanting write. congratulations dear poet. Cheers.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/2/2024 8:17:00 PM

Nette, CONGRATS on your win with this lovely, descriptive piece. Janice

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/28/2024 8:14:00 AM

Dear Nette, what a great image of a beautiful celebration of love and the blessings that each new day brings. I was particularly enchanted by the line: "Hearth-kisses divine...it's love." This is such a heartfelt piece; your words inspire us to appreciate the beauty of everyday life and the love that surrounds us. Very commendable. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/25/2024 4:40:00 PM

The beauty and warmth of your writing truly shine through in this wonderfully evocative piece. It flows effortlessly, and your verses are exquisite. The imagery you've portrayed throughout this is truly captivating.

Paige Hind

Date: 11/25/2024 1:30:00 PM

Beautiful! I really enjoyed this rhyme of yours! <3

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/25/2024 10:10:00 AM

Nette, a beautiful way to think about a day. It makes me smile internally and warms my heart to read! Thanks!!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/25/2024 1:50:00 AM

Dear nette, how beautiful and soul warming is the way youv written this in such a descriptive manner. Flows so seamlessly and your rhymes are sublime. I think andrea will enjoy this one woven in such a heartfelt rhythm. I love the way youv painted imagery throughout this. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light today and always

Len Gasun

Date: 11/24/2024 5:27:00 AM

Wow! I love this so much my dear poet friend, Nette! So beautiful and inspiring. I want to try this beautiful form too but can't think of a theme. Your "Sunrise In Love" is superb. A fave. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest. Hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/24/2024 1:51:00 AM

Your poems are always Divinely inspired I'm sure, how else would you write this, love xo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/23/2024 11:59:00 AM

Such pretty imagery! … while clouds draped in blue glow through sunday's hue