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Sunrise

a one-line senryu advertisement sunrise business as usual Aleve-iated

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 4:53:00 AM

Nice senryu on sunrise, congrats on the win, Reason

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 9:56:00 PM

Aleve, relieve both are welcomed when pain is dancing. Congrats on your win!!!

Mark Trichet

Date: 8/20/2014 9:08:00 PM

Very clever you are! Loved it and congrats

Tim Smith

Date: 8/20/2014 5:55:00 PM

I use it way too often....congrats

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/20/2014 5:26:00 PM

Haha clever! well done, grats on your win:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2014 3:06:00 PM

aha, I think I get it!! Congrats for your fine win.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 8/20/2014 12:20:00 PM

Top of the morning to you. Congrats on your win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/20/2014 10:01:00 AM

Good one !!! And yes......sometimes, relief comes in a little bottle !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:29:00 AM

Reason, you got me with the Aleve, note on the bottom. Original.... Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/30/2014 6:38:00 AM

as the journey called life continues,with age comes pain,well you got the remedy,get to work R.A.P

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 8/7/2014 8:37:00 AM

thanks, appreciate the comment, Richard.