Sunrise

I sit in my kitchen 
with a cup of tea,
while the world 
is still asleep,
and there in the darkness, 
I  wait for you 
in a state of tranquility.

Soon - a drop 
of magenta  seeps,
into a sea of black,
as it  bleeds and bleeds,
in multiple streams,
bringing the daylight back.

Then from the base, 
of a purple line,
where the sea and earth
meet  sky,
a blazing ball of fire appears,
nearly blinding my eyes,
and the night -  in a flash -  
disappears.

Higher and higher,
that ball of fire,
rises into the sky;
setting the boughs
of the pines ablaze,
in shades of red,
and golden rays,
beneath a sky
now royal blue
as I watch the sun
rise in the East
and dream - again,
of you.

~~~~~


Author:  Elaine Cecelia George, of Canada
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kithinji Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 6:11 AM
And dream again... of you, my friend- the poem.
A   Avatar
December 28, 2012 at 2:33 PM
HI Elaine, stopping by to bother you again... hope you are well... have a happy 2013... always~ PD
Mister Roboto Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 2:13 PM
-Higher and higher, that ball of fire, rises into the sky; of the pines ablaze, in shades of red, and golden rays, beneath a sky now royal blue- A----MAZING imagery! You better get to publishing that one girl. Seldom I run across a vital "Blazing Beat" as this! Take care of your work and make share of your work. The world needs to hear your fingers bleed.
Deane Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Beautifully written Elaine, I can picture myself in the same scenario...luv shannon
Guzzi Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Some loved ones affect us like this, blazing balls of fire ;) LighT & Love Lainie
Freeman Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 6:32 PM
Elaine! A pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Many congrats Elaine on your win ......
Mehta Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 3:22 AM
Many congrats Elaine on big win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Sweetheart Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Congrats Lainie on your spectacular win in this contest by HG with this vivid and vibrant write my friend.. enjoy another wonderful win with luv...
Johnson Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 4:37 PM
Truly beautiful Elaine. I have to get out of my house to see the full sunrise. Wish we had turned our house around when we built it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 3:16 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, Elaine
Guzzi Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 2:50 PM
ahhh such a lovely conclusion! Congrad's Lainie!! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Lainie. Love, Carol
Mac Donald Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 10:51 AM
A vibrant write, Elaine. At first I thought it was about poetical inspiration, though now feels more inclined towards a soulful longing. Whichever, this is a dandy piece! Beautiful imagery, Elaine. Best wishes, Mikki
Beck Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 3:51 AM
this is lovely...especially your imagery..wonderful...good luck in the contest
Okwudili Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 8:01 PM
Elaine, you're good at describing in a flash how sunrise occurs with its 'golden rays' and a 'royal blue. Nice write.
Onclaud Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 12:37 PM
oh lainie... you went really high in poetic richness here... best winning wishes! huggs, nette
Devonshire Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 5:10 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Lainie. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 5:19 AM
beautiful images to convey your thoughts on sunrise, Lainie
Guzzi Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 6:05 PM
so romantic Laine! Light & Love
Alpestris Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 12:37 AM
It's amazing to me how points of view truly vary. I like the way you welcome the sunrise, and your imagery is splendid. In my case, sunrise sort of sneaks on me, so I find it sort of menacing...not quite the same! Thanks for sharing, I appreciate the different perspective.
M Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 8:18 PM
Wonderful write. Very crafted poem
Delacroix Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 1:01 PM
Awesome description of the sunrise! The place you live at sounds beautiful! Very well written, Elaine! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind words on my poems. Love, Caroline.
Devonshire Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Beautiful poem -- love the way you stare into the black coffee and it explodes with visions of the universe. If this is a dream, it's one I'd like to share. Best wishes in HG's contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 10:23 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Lainie. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol
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