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I wait in blue hour seeking the sky's color scheme lounging in my chair

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Date: 4/12/2024 3:22:00 PM
Hello Karen, A lovely haiku - very in the moment. Perhaps weakened by the repeat of 'wait'. Should 'skies' be 'sky's'?
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Karen Croft
Date: 4/19/2024 8:44:00 AM
I will check into it. Thanks

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