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Sunlit Ambrosia

People watching, on a park bench under a ripe sun, I sat, seemingly wasting time. My heart smiled the second hour when I saw John, my father, in the clouds. He smiled back with arms that reached from the past to pick the sun from the sky like a peach. Golden light splattered, as he bit into the fruit at high noon; with my head back and tongue out, I tasted drops of sunlit ambrosia. My father winked from the clouds. His eyes searched to teach a lesson of love from father to daughter, spanning a gap in time. "God is love", I heard on whispering wind. "Scotland". Again, he said, "Scotland". I didn't understand. "My mom wanted to go but never did. Live, give and forgive, outlive the bad, relive the good", like thunder from his mouth I heard the words echo. "Time is on My Side" played in the background on an old transistor radio as ancient as the silent man, still like a statue, next to me. A hush fell on the park and a peace swept over me. Men, women, spirits kept moving by for hours, yet none were noticed as my wide eyes stared at the passing sky. I was happy. In fact, I had never felt happier, but I knew I was running on empty, exhaustion washed over me from the power of emotions while the sky moved north to south. Clouds faded with daylight. Sadly, I blew a kiss goodbye "knowing the sky was feeling the same". By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, May 31, 2012 for Mish-Mash contest (Tracie)

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Date: 6/25/2012 6:26:00 PM
wonderful endearing write..my Mom seems to speak to me often..it matters not if it is really so what matters is I remember my Mom! Light & Love
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Date: 6/23/2012 9:16:00 PM
man- this just really blows me away! And to think you wrote this with such strict parameters
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Date: 6/23/2012 9:12:00 PM
The imagery and all metaphore with your father, the sky etc is just amazing. WOW! Congrats on your win, well deserved
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Date: 6/23/2012 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Tracie's "Mish-Mash" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:22:00 PM
Well done. Congrats....Tanya
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Date: 6/22/2012 9:19:00 AM
Lovely
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Date: 6/22/2012 8:13:00 AM
Amazing Poetry by you Rhonda!!Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 6/22/2012 8:06:00 AM
Beautiful and touching! So lovely and sad, Rhonda....congratulations!!
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Date: 6/21/2012 8:13:00 PM
I loved this the first time I saw it, and here it is on TOP. congrats, Rhonda.
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Date: 6/21/2012 7:48:00 PM
Congratulations on a masterfully written poem.
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Date: 6/2/2012 3:12:00 PM
Love this Rhonda, i don't read this as mish-mash, but as a truly poetic masterpiece. anyhow you know now i just love this.
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Date: 6/2/2012 7:28:00 AM
Morning Rhon. I read this one last evening and was too pooped to write another comment...I find this poem of poems to be surreal like a speck of gold from the streets of heaven...to have your father visit u in this fashion only makes me want it to come true for myself...A true beauty that stirs the soul of a daughter who insanely misses dear ole dad! Not writing much but defin enjoying reading more lately. Best of luck with this show stopper. Gwendolen
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:02:00 AM
Wow Rhonda. This is truly wonderful, written with great imagination. You seem to be able to express that which many find impossible and you do it with great style, wit and grace. A very impressive piece. I am sure NO luck will be needed for this entry. Thank you for your nice comment.
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Date: 6/1/2012 7:56:00 PM
you just wowed me again. I think this is the first mish mash one that I've come upon. But based on what I am reading here, I think you have set the bar VERY high. What a poem. You have such a poetic soul, Rhonda!
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Amy Green
Date: 6/23/2012 9:14:00 PM
I agree- nothing was even close to as good as this
Date: 5/31/2012 8:22:00 PM
elegant imagery Rhonda with a kiss of sunlight ambrosia to enhance your beautiful lines.. so happy to read some lovely oetry tonight.. glad u enjoyed my new adventure.. have many mor new ones luv.. stay blessed..luv..
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Date: 5/31/2012 6:17:00 PM
Elusive, distant and delightful, enjoyed , Rhonda, Jag
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Date: 5/31/2012 1:22:00 PM
Love this entry, Rhonda - I tried this one and had to give up...for today. Congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 5/31/2012 6:00:00 AM
Brilliant write here Rhonda!! Love the imagery and yet so powerful!!!
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Date: 5/31/2012 2:54:00 AM
Rhonda I like this, it is not a mish-mash in a good sense obviously...good luck..David
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