Sunlight and Shadows

Sun S p l a y e d Light Trees O p e n e d Wide(expanse) Shadows b o u n c e d Silhouettes
A new form to which I have been introduced called Brevete.. Three words per poem Words similar in length or syllables First line word is a noun Second line word is a verb Third line word is a noun The second line (verb) should be spaced out to show action like the verb I think it is ususally only one poem but I chose to write three
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Horne Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 2:39 PM
yes, I tried writing one of these today too - loved yours
Trifiatis Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 6:40 AM
Congratulation my dear Sara for this new form! I have just noticed it in Mystic Rose's poem and I lived it. I might write something myself following your magnificent poem!
Anish Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 1:35 PM
I volunteer at Poets House in NYC and I have posted poems of this form on their website. I have never tried this form. Thanks for introducing it to me with your fine work. Peeace 7 Love Matthew Anish
La France Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Sara, wonderful, thanks for showing us a new form to try, well done
Carroll Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 12:39 PM
Most creative Sara!
Poteet Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:39 PM
Sara, this might prove useful in a brevity group, I am a part of...Thanks for the introduction to it. Any limit to how many poems per piece?
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