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Sunflowers

Sunflowers sunflowers search for sunlight rows of swelling seeds golden smile of autumn

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Date: 9/10/2024 1:23:00 PM
Autumn has the 'Midas' touch, Gilding flowers with golden smiles
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Date: 9/7/2024 5:45:00 PM
I like how the imagery glides amidst an autumn scene...choosing sunflowers is a great bet of nature , Sam...wonderfully composed!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/10/2024 10:28:00 AM
Hi Nette! Thank you for the blessings of your beautiful feedback! Writing haiku really helped in the rhythmic cadence of this poem. I so appreciate your eye for the poetic details in the Than-Bauk! And, I have come to appreciate sunflowers even more! Hope all is well. Take care. Blessings to you!
Date: 9/7/2024 6:29:00 AM
Dear samszy, sunflowers are always my fave and something about them makes me happy even when growing up! Was always a fave! And you’ve written such a soul warming than bauk! With alliterations and also such beautiful imagery! I really love especially “ sunflowers search for sunlight” exactly what they do ! “ golden smile of autumn“ this line made my heart smile! Stunning take! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 9/6/2024 12:17:00 PM
Very beautiful Than-Bauk, Sam! Loved it-
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/10/2024 10:23:00 AM
Greetings Paige! Thank you so much for the blessings of your lovely compliments - makes my heart smile to know you loved it! Sending blessings abundant as the fall harvest.
Date: 9/6/2024 10:52:00 AM
Lovely write Sara, best wishes
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/10/2024 10:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joseph! Your compliment is like finding a bit of sunshine on a cloudy day! Sending bountiful blessings!
Date: 9/6/2024 9:11:00 AM
I enjoy reading about your wonderful Sunflowers. A pretty flower/write. "Good Luck" Have a fun/blessed day writing away...................
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/9/2024 2:52:00 PM
Hi Paula, so much fun to share this lovely flower with another flower lover! Thank you for your best wishes and blessings! Sending warm yellow blessings of autumn!
Date: 9/6/2024 4:42:00 AM
Dear Sam, A wonderful Than-Bauk by a wonderful poet! My one younger sister always loved sunflowers and so I am going to share your work of art with her. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/10/2024 10:18:00 AM
Dear Daniel! I am deeply honored that you want to share this poem with your sister who loves sunflowers! Thank you for that blessing and the blessings of your lovely feedback. So grateful. Sunflowers teach us a wonderful lesson about always seeking the sunlight of God's grace - turning to God's light. Sending blessings of God's light, dear friend.
Date: 9/5/2024 3:04:00 PM
Sunflowers are such a fascinating plant in their beauty plus the fact that they lift theirs heads to the sun and follow it. I imagine around here they are a little crunchy now as we have had a somewhat dry autumn. Nice reading your work. Sara K
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/10/2024 10:24:00 AM
Will pray for the best - rain and no damage or injuries!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/10/2024 3:22:00 AM
Sam, they say that the tropical system in The Gulf of Mexico is going to come this way and will become a hurricane by Thursday which will bring wind and rain this way. I hope that it is just some nice wet weather and no damage nor any injuries or deaths. We do need the rain. Sara
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/9/2024 2:23:00 PM
Hi Sara! Sunflowers are so enchanting as they follow the sun across the sky. Their bright yellow seems to be a reflection of the sun itself! Thank you for your delightful message. Praying for rain for you! We've been through drouight and it isn't fun! Blessings to you!

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