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Separated from source, feel incomplete
Until we nestle in tranquil silence 
Noise external fades away at Gods feet
Filling soul with bliss in joyful parlance 
Layered delight, day and night, in vibrant dance
Osmotic love caress in renewal
Wafting fragrance, soft currents toroidal
Envelopes presence in gentle embrace
Rapture unending, as Gods miracle
Suffusing form, as divine bestowed grace

22-May-2021

Acrostic Dizain

Sunflower poetry contest
Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/2/2021 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 6/1/2021 10:49:00 AM
Simply "divine" in its eloquent expression of romance and renewal Seeker. "Divine bestowed grace" integrated into the sunflower itself. Lovely! Congratulations on your win. Blessings of miracles to you!
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Date: 6/1/2021 9:23:00 PM
Thanks Sam! :)
Date: 6/1/2021 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. It's a beautiful poem ~ Mala
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Date: 6/1/2021 9:23:00 PM
Thanks for hosting the contest, Mala! Enjoyed writing for the theme, thanks for the recognition!
Date: 5/31/2021 11:23:00 PM
Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/31/2021 11:58:00 PM
Became possible to write a Dizain when contest rules were relaxed, allowing SUNFLOWERS, in plural
Date: 5/22/2021 6:38:00 AM
Wonderful write. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/22/2021 6:59:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation, Regina!

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