Sunflower Song

seeds for eyes ride breeze brown and yellow melodies sung by sun sliding down trees

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/18/2024 9:30:00 PM

Beautiful flowers they are too Karen, haven't had many this year though. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Karen Jones
Date: 7/19/2024 2:28:00 AM

Yes God showed out when he made sunflowers:0) Tom thanks for stopping by and happy weekend!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2024 5:50:00 PM

what a delightful poem Karen! Write on my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Karen Jones
Date: 7/18/2024 6:21:00 PM

Thanks Jan! Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/18/2024 6:12:00 AM

pretty so pretty! the center verse great!

Karen Jones
Date: 7/18/2024 9:24:00 AM

Thanks Kim

Ink Empress

Date: 7/18/2024 3:27:00 AM

Beautiful! The last line is brilliant for this sunflower song haiku dear karen. I love sunflowers and as i read this i wished if only i could listen to brown and gold melodies right now. Sending you light always

Karen Jones
Date: 7/18/2024 4:37:00 AM

Thanks Inky!