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5/10/2014 for Admire a Summer Flower Poetry Contest sponsored by Jay Narain

Cigarettes and babble from my mom and her friend, Four years old, in someone's backyard, bored to no end, When I spot a wonder that I will never forget. He stood high on a stalk. I can still see him, yet. That gent on the top, they said, was a sunflower. No longer bored, I could gaze at him for an hour. He was huge, like no other bloom I'd ever seen. I was enraptured by the guy on a stalk of green, A curious flower, like my bright friend in the sky, Its bronze center, yellow petals, just for my eye. Just like the sun, he tilted down for me to see. He absorbed the sun's magic and shined it on me.

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Date: 5/16/2024 9:46:00 AM
Thanks for listing your nice poem in my sponsored contest. Congratulations.
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David Crandall
Date: 5/16/2024 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Jay! It was a pleasure to call up a memory and write it.
Date: 5/12/2024 2:06:00 PM
Ahh!! I like the personification of the sunflower and making a man of him. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 5/12/2024 3:18:00 PM
Thanks Sara, haha, yep, I wondered about that, you'd think a flower should be female, but this is based on a memory, and the male sunflower seems truer to my memory.
Date: 5/10/2024 3:20:00 PM
You've described one of summer's outstanding flowers quite beautifully. Especially liked these lines: He was huge, like no other bloom I'd ever seen. I was enraptured by the guy on a stalk of green, Gotta love summer; gotta love sunflowers! Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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David Crandall
Date: 5/10/2024 3:39:00 PM
Thanks, Sara, agreed - what a flower!

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