Sundress Undress

SUNDRESS    UNDRESS

Hot day at the beach  -   time to catch some sun, 
Maybe also catch some son.

She was a twelve year old girl -  tousled  hair -
In  a tussle  between herself and mum 
It was too low at the top  up there
Too high at the bottom -  you could see her bum.

Pull it up and fail to cover some bits
Pull it down and can’t  find anywhere  it fits

Bare midriff,   yellow with tiny dots of  black.
Economical on material mum laughed  -
Almost  all gone at the front, and none at the back.
To be honest, it was somewhat  daft:

They  argued  -  yes I will ;  no you won’t;  and then -
Not at your age;  if not  at my age,  then when?

But it was impossible to stop her  (so  willful ! )
Without actually putting the dress out of reach.
She  couldn’t stop  her  from wearing the dress so awful:
Girl  cringed as mum wiggled it up and down the beach.

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Written by Sydney Peck  

For competition  THE SUNDRESS  (Constance La France )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 6:09 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Sydney in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
Devonshire Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 9:42 AM
You had me laughing out loud, Syd! Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 8:04 AM
Wonderful write here Sydney!Congrats on your win---kashinath
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 6:53 AM
Congratulations on your win Sydney in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 11:56 PM
lol, syd.. your humor can surely bring you the trophy! my best CHEERS for the greeeat win! now, buy her that midriff..:) hugggs
K. Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 7:04 PM
aaack! O_o love the twist you give, here Sydney :) very very witty ;) you got me laughing aloud here-- loved the humor you put in here ;) Congrats on your win!
Mehta Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, Sydney
Sweetheart Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Congrats Syd on your terrific win in the sundress contest with this awesome entry and wonderful write luv.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv...
Smith Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 4:29 AM
Ohh this is just wonderful =P
Onclaud Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 12:56 AM
har har har, syd... your comic streak strikes again! really got a sharp eye for details and a nose that sniffs into my poetic piles of draft.. okay, you can have this one! j.kidding... true delight! winning's best to you! :) hugggs, nette
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March 23, 2011 at 7:03 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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