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Sundown's Tableau

Streaks of orange hue Burst as dewed flowers Remind me anew, Of lost sundown hours When eyes bid adieu. Create Your Tableau nette onclaud's Contest From Carly Lalion 10.15.2014 #3:.“One day I saw the sun set forty-four times!' … 'You know, when you're feeling very sad, sunsets are wonderful.

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Date: 10/25/2014 9:30:00 PM
Love the comparison of the imagery to the eyes as they bid adieu. A smart tableau! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:26:00 PM
I applaud this excellent piece and congratulate you for your top of the class well-deserved win! Congratulations Carly! Pandita
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:21:00 AM
- There are many that I have read before .... and many who not arrived at the winners list .... but, everyone can not win! - Really hard to judge .... (glad it's not me :) - In my eyes, everyone is so beautiful written! - CONGRATULATIONS !!! - Have a restful and lovely weekend,Carly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:07:00 AM
This is such a lovely tableau where colours and memories mingle with the flowing rhyme. Congratulations on your top win, Carly!! // paul
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:04:00 AM
Creative winner..Way to go..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 10/25/2014 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 10/25/2014 1:34:00 AM
Congrats on the top place win, Carly
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Date: 10/24/2014 5:35:00 PM
Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/24/2014 5:23:00 PM
Enjoy your big win..Your sunset poem is quite beautiful. BG
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Date: 10/24/2014 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Carly with this beautiful sundown.
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Date: 10/24/2014 3:55:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Carly:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/16/2014 3:25:00 AM
beautifully penned - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
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