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Sunday Mornings

joy, faith, unity harmony and compassion the congregation For Brian's "noun" haiku challenge.

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Kash Poet

Date: 5/27/2011 12:59:00 PM

Excellent Haiku!Enjoyed.....

Jack Horne

Date: 5/23/2011 11:20:00 AM

Very sweet write, my friend - it reminds me of when I used to go to church with my gran. Ah, yes, I know the Eagles - Sue loves Hotel California. Sue had an appointment at Urology today and they're going to try 'bladder implants' - basically, a solution that will wash the bladder, by the sound of it. She'll have to attend Out Patients every week as they will administer it via a catheter. It won't do anything for E Coli ESBL but may help 'simple' UTIs. Fingers crossed...

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/19/2010 12:45:00 PM

Amazing work Carolyn, a superb haiku...Raul

Anne Linington

Date: 2/17/2010 3:58:00 AM

Enjoyed your Haiki about your Sunday Congregation. You may enjoy my Cinquain "Harvest"- it is my first attempt at this form and I was surprised how pleasing it could be. My personal favourite is still "The Plough"inspired by a ploughed field I saw during a week of guided prayer (like a retreat). I also write for Faithwriters, Pink Ink Workshop and Worldwidebiblestudies.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 2/9/2010 9:03:00 AM

All the best in that contest ... and thanks for your gift of inspiring others.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/3/2010 7:29:00 AM

Great words to your Haiku Carolyn.. so meaningful and with much depth ... luv your "harmony and compassion" in the poetic congregation... would be beneficial... thankxxx for sharing... luv.. Linda-Marie

Gypse Summers

Date: 2/2/2010 1:25:00 PM

a form i have to respect cause i cant write in it at all but still you show a great skill at what ever your pen touches really good haiku

John Beam

Date: 1/30/2010 9:29:00 AM

I feel it in the atmospere thank you love ya Sister

Danny Nunn

Date: 1/26/2010 8:34:00 PM

Sounds like a perfect Sunday to me..Thanks on One Day At A Time...that is all we can do..Danny

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 1/26/2010 3:45:00 PM

Miss Carolyn, I really like this one a lot. I think that you have some kind of winner here. You aree ever the lady and I thank you for that. Regards, Gerard.

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 1/25/2010 3:11:00 PM

I love it! It says it all! Thanks for the kind comments! Lived in New England most of my life , but I too am walking the beaches of Florida! Sure makes it hard to feel spring!!! Love & Sunshine Jeralynn

Shirin Neshat

Date: 1/25/2010 3:28:00 AM

I Interesting

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/24/2010 6:27:00 PM

Dear Carolyn, Amazing "Noun Haiku" I was having a hard time coming up with one but after reading this Masterpiece I think I can, I think I can Good Luck ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/24/2010 7:55:00 AM

You must feel happy in yout congregation, Carolyn! And thank you for your hearty comments. Love, Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2010 5:47:00 PM

WEll, this one was a dandy .How did I miss it? Thanks so much for your comment to me. Andrea

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 1/23/2010 12:27:00 PM

The best description of a congregation I have read. It is all there, just the way I envision God designed it to be. Mac

Billy Thekidster

Date: 1/22/2010 3:40:00 PM

...and yet another great haiku written by you. Good job and best of luck in the contest Carolyn. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 1/22/2010 5:13:00 AM

Great presentation of Sunday mornings with nouns a well done poem for the contest!

John Freeman

Date: 1/21/2010 7:23:00 PM

You have the nouns, meter, and really a good subject, lady. Actually my favorite subject, joy, faith and unity, all aspects of Love. Smile.God bless, good luck, lets truck. Sincerely, Love, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 1/21/2010 2:55:00 PM

Delightful faith laiden Haiku Carolyn, got to be up there with the winners >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2010 11:45:00 AM

Great write that should be in the winner's circle.. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Milton Toran

Date: 1/21/2010 6:21:00 AM

Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Thanks for sharing and also for the kind sentiments on my latest.---Milt

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/21/2010 3:51:00 AM

and what better way to spend our Sunday mornings indeed? You've captured it in 8 words--wonderful haiku Carolyn and wish you all the best in the contest :) thanks so much for all your wonderful comments :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/21/2010 3:15:00 AM

very well done, Carolyn. Nice capture of a Sunday morning in nouns or any other grammar for that matter. enjoyed this. Good fortune in the contest.-Robert

Bojosi Ditshwele

Date: 1/21/2010 1:28:00 AM

Hi Carolyn a lovely poem to read. I was caught by the title Sunday Mornings , the first poem i posted on PS is titled Sunday Morning. good luck on the contest......Bojosi