Sunday Drive

Sunday Drive

It was a Sunday drive,
High on the Kiamichi trail,
When an overlook was spied,
And out of the car we bailed.

(The sun danced low 
On purple evening hills)

I looked down at the green valley,
Curls of evening meat scents
Wafted from stone pits of fire,
Amid postage stamp crops and tents.

(Wondered did I if the insect sized
People were looking up at our road.)

As I raised my gaze, an Indian maiden
Stood beside me smiling
In her long braided blue-black hair,
Her chamois beaded dress, most beguiling.

(And I asked her if she was an apparition,
But no answer was forthcoming.)

We lingered long at the outlook,
And I looked down one last time,
When my awe-filled eyes did finally arise,
The Indian lady was gone, and I

Was left with one long eagle feather
Cradled In my arm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/20/2017 9:36:00 AM
Hi, there, again, Maria! You are so kind.
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Date: 9/20/2017 1:59:00 AM
A lovely story with a touch of mystery thrown in Sunlite. I guess this will be one Sunday drive that you will remember for a very long time. I enjoyed this lovely write of yours...Maria
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Date: 9/17/2017 4:57:00 PM
This is gooood!!! I can feel myself in the back riding along. The rhythm and flow is great. Wonderful write my friend. James :)
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Date: 9/15/2017 10:49:00 PM
I really enjoyed the story in this poem! Lovely!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/16/2017 12:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 9/15/2017 8:20:00 PM
A beautiful write Sunlite. Intriguing and mysterious. Well done!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/16/2017 12:01:00 PM
Thank you, fine poet!
Date: 9/15/2017 2:49:00 PM
Was it Pocahontas? Nice write Sunlite..
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/16/2017 12:01:00 PM
Could have been, Silent One! Thank you.
Date: 9/15/2017 1:39:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely Sunday drive--with some intrigue-well done SW!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/16/2017 12:03:00 PM
Thank you, kind Vijay!
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