Sunday Drive

Sunday Drive

It was a Sunday drive,
High on the Kiamichi trail,
When an overlook was spied,
And out of the car we bailed.

(The sun danced low 
On purple evening hills)

I looked down at the green valley,
Curls of evening meat scents
Wafted from stone pits of fire,
Amid postage stamp crops and tents.

(Wondered did I if the insect sized
People were looking up at our road.)

As I raised my gaze, an Indian maiden
Stood beside me smiling
In her long braided blue-black hair,
Her chamois beaded dress, most beguiling.

(And I asked her if she was an apparition,
But no answer was forthcoming.)

We lingered long at the outlook,
And I looked down one last time,
When my awe-filled eyes did finally arise,
The Indian lady was gone, and I

Was left with one long eagle feather
Cradled In my arm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wanter Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:36 AM
Hi, there, again, Maria! You are so kind.
Williams Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:59 AM
A lovely story with a touch of mystery thrown in Sunlite. I guess this will be one Sunday drive that you will remember for a very long time. I enjoyed this lovely write of yours...Maria
Lee Sr. Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 4:57 PM
This is gooood!!! I can feel myself in the back riding along. The rhythm and flow is great. Wonderful write my friend. James :)
Vaso Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 10:49 PM
I really enjoyed the story in this poem! Lovely!
Wanter Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
Ashley Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 8:20 PM
A beautiful write Sunlite. Intriguing and mysterious. Well done!
Wanter Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 12:01 PM
Thank you, fine poet!
One Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 2:49 PM
Was it Pocahontas? Nice write Sunlite..
Wanter Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 12:01 PM
Could have been, Silent One! Thank you.
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 1:39 PM
Sounds like a lovely Sunday drive--with some intrigue-well done SW!
Wanter Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 12:03 PM
Thank you, kind Vijay!
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