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Sunday Drive

Sunday Drive It was a Sunday drive, High on the Kiamichi trail, When an overlook was spied, And out of the car we bailed. (The sun danced low On purple evening hills) I looked down at the green valley, Curls of evening meat scents Wafted from stone pits of fire, Amid postage stamp crops and tents. (Wondered did I if the insect sized People were looking up at our road.) As I raised my gaze, an Indian maiden Stood beside me smiling In her long braided blue-black hair, Her chamois beaded dress, most beguiling. (And I asked her if she was an apparition, But no answer was forthcoming.) We lingered long at the outlook, And I looked down one last time, When my awe-filled eyes did finally arise, The Indian lady was gone, and I Was left with one long eagle feather Cradled In my arm.

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Date: 9/20/2017 9:36:00 AM
Hi, there, again, Maria! You are so kind.
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Date: 9/20/2017 1:59:00 AM
A lovely story with a touch of mystery thrown in Sunlite. I guess this will be one Sunday drive that you will remember for a very long time. I enjoyed this lovely write of yours...Maria
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Date: 9/17/2017 4:57:00 PM
This is gooood!!! I can feel myself in the back riding along. The rhythm and flow is great. Wonderful write my friend. James :)
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Date: 9/15/2017 10:49:00 PM
I really enjoyed the story in this poem! Lovely!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/16/2017 12:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 9/15/2017 8:20:00 PM
A beautiful write Sunlite. Intriguing and mysterious. Well done!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/16/2017 12:01:00 PM
Thank you, fine poet!
Date: 9/15/2017 2:49:00 PM
Was it Pocahontas? Nice write Sunlite..
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/16/2017 12:01:00 PM
Could have been, Silent One! Thank you.
Date: 9/15/2017 1:39:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely Sunday drive--with some intrigue-well done SW!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/16/2017 12:03:00 PM
Thank you, kind Vijay!

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