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We named her Miss Sundae, our cat with a cause She looks like a princess in 'Dairy Queen' sauce ... (Vanilla ice cream, and butterscotch paws) A calico lady of gold, brown and white Her royalty reigns every day, every night It's a ritual for her to sit on the back of the chair Always there, near the desk, where I'm trying to write While I'm sipping my coffee, she'll bask in the light I'll scan the newspaper, digesting the news But such effort's in vain, ...it is simply no use! To read today's headlines, and the stories, so bleak the economy's headaches, or the news of the week Perhaps it is Sundae's practical joke... She may have a bit of a jealous streak! For she prods and she pokes, craving my strokes She pokes holes in the paper....hops on my knees Purring with ease....getting under my chin...with her Cheshire grin Pushing aside, or squeezing within She paws at my paper, this pesky dear pet Requiring attention, her needs must be met! If I'm reading a book, or there's a needle to thread I must stop what I'm doing, and love her instead! She creates a distraction, demands satisfaction If a computer's in use....she needs no excuse To lie on the keyboard....whatever her muse It's all in her skill...with her purring.....I'm still... At her mercy....my feline, she's a furry old cat But I love her, my Sundae.......it's as simple as that! ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, For Pet Contest: Sponsored by Laura Loo

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Date: 1/31/2016 11:05:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your sweet Pet win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/27/2016 11:22:00 PM
How lovely Carrie.. Congrats on first place win!!
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Date: 1/26/2016 2:11:00 PM
That is beautiful.
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:47:00 AM
Hi CARRIE, CONGRATS ON YOUR LOVELY PET WIN. LOVE ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/26/2016 1:12:00 AM
adorable piece on sundae, carrie... finest congrats on your top spot!..huggs
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Date: 1/25/2016 9:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your number one with this poem on your kitty. She sounds a lot like my current big tom who wiggles his way in wherever or whatever. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/25/2016 9:09:00 PM
Sweet Sundae and sweet rhyming verses about her. Congratulations, Carrie.
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Date: 1/25/2016 5:04:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Excellent write. Enjoyed.
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Date: 1/25/2016 3:36:00 PM
Carrie, the second I started reading this, I knew it was a winner. You carried such a perfect flow with rhyme. Congrats on your win and thank you for being a part of my contest *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 9/7/2010 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "Cat Poems~~". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2010 3:30:00 PM
Carrie, Your poem was written with so much charm and a delight to read. "Where I sip morning tea...and drink morning light" Wonderful lines. As you capture Sundae's antics with such mastery of writing, I can certainly see why your poem won top honors. Our cat actually slaps the magazine out of my hands to get his attention. I had to laugh at your cat lying on the keyboard. A really Awesome poem. Congratulations on your big win! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:45:00 PM
Excellent and congratulations! Carrie your sentiment is is akin to my one for my Manx cat. He is my baby, and he knows it. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations for this win with your fine poem, Carrie
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Date: 9/3/2010 9:47:00 AM
I envy you your SUNDAE. Man, if only my cats were like that. I can't get them so sit on my lap and it makes me miss Callie cat so much . anyway, this is one of the best of the cat poem. I really enjoyed it. and congrats. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:28:00 PM
adorable, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:02:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your purr fect win in the CAT contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy and have a sae and happy holiday weekend..with luv..
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:00:00 PM
And adorable poem for an adored cat. (Mine is setting on the back of my neck as I type.) Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:28:00 PM
Cats will do whatever they want, Carrie! And they know they'll suffer no repercussions because we love them. My cats loved played with paper, too, but never did get on my keyboard. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:22:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on third place in my contest, I just loved this poem, maybe because I have a Butterscotch Sundae on Vaniella, but I call her Patches~~ Dear Heart
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Date: 8/24/2010 10:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Carrie. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. The best to you in the contest with this amazing story. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 7:53:00 PM
Smile! ~ This is soo cool and so sweet and so beautiful; I loved this easy peaceful lovely write; and I love kitty cats too!!! ~ "Hello Dear Precious, Talented & Beautiful Carrie Richards!!!" ~ I hope that life is treating "Your Brightness" wonderfully dear!! ~ "Sweet Lovely Poem, &, Sundae Also" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Evening Dear Carrie Richards, Amid The Gentle Purrs of Love; Goodnight Dear!:) ~
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:33:00 PM
A nice write for the Cat Contest. Good luck in the contest
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