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Suncatcher --Recited

A visitor— icicle fingers tapping on my windows' pain— white blanket in tow Hurting enough, I paid him no mind so he kept tap, tap, tapping ‘til cobweb-like cracks appeared: a final, gentle tap shatters my windows My rainbow world now smothered, pallid, forced into boredom and slumber, sunlight chased away and I am never the same again… Soul gets plunged deep in the cold blinded by whiteness, numbed with simplicity there is an eerie stillness, almost as if no one dared to breathe, even the barren trees refused to quiver brittle dendrites seem to claw the sky futile though, for they are frozen, grasping at nothingness, clouds stubborn and stoic, brooding in silent grayness …and then from within, a filigreed whisper escapes palpable and brave~ it weaves its way through the branches, gathering strength wherever it went it beckons to the sky, which in turn gives in and celebrates ~ letting dainty confetti fall white, yet amazingly graceful each flake falls softly on the ground— a fashionable brocade trees softly sway now, and dance to a winter song the sky weeps with happiness for seeing a glimpse of life— diamond teardrops they catch a bit of evasive sunlight, of which I thought I’ve lost and give birth to miniature rainbows… all this time, Sunlight was there I just never knew how to catch it.
an audio of me reciting this poem http://www.4shared.com/music/Q_tqp2LEba/suncatcher.html?#
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Inman Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 11:26 AM
A beautiful write and a lovely recitation, wonderfully descriptive and filled with exceptional imagery.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Nikko, this mesmerizing winter poem is a celebration of the season extolling the magnificent loveliness of Mother Nature! Hearing you read this was an added pleasure Nikko. Outstanding! A fave! 7 ; )
K. Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Thank you very much, Connie for the fave and for your thoughts :) I am glad you like this.
Nance Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 7:19 AM
Fascinatingly descriptive and very well done. I was hooked
K. Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Thank you very much, Casarah :)!
Chircop Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Im glad you shared the link sweet Nikko..Its a beautiful poem..You capture the sun with your amazing talent ..splashing a rainbow feeling wherever you are.
Goff Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 3:22 PM
Wow Nikko! Thanks for the link! Absolutely wonderful verse! Miniature Rainbows...Awesome! Jimbo
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations Nikko, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol
Hickman Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 11:47 AM
Congratulations on your win with this spectacular write of emotionally penned beauty from a heart that has such tenderness and love, along with a maind that has a desriptive imagination to see more than so many others,,,Thank You for all your visits to my words,,Blessings..Cecil
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 9:51 AM
nikks, since you're super with freeverse and short forms, could you comment on m works, PICASSO in JAPAN and " rareness of a soup man" .. need your valuable feedback! :)
Puddifoot Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 9:40 AM
congrats on this excellent winning poem! so many wonderful lines, love "clouds stubborn and stoic"...
Pettit Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 12:09 AM
A superb write, Nikko. Congratulations on winning in the contest with this entry.
Horsman Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 11:26 PM
Just love this awesome poem nikko, reminds me of my childhood, seeing the ice patterns form on the windows, congrats to you with this winner, just love the imagery here of winter, Harry
Mannan Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 7:54 PM
So vivid and beautiful. many congrats for this win dear friend.
Mehta Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, nikko. enjoyed the poem
Gorelick Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 4:26 PM
A wonderful BIG win for you..congrats..this poem is just awesome. BG
Guzzi Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 2:03 PM
such an uplifting tirnabout, i was there with you all the way! just a wonderful write and win! Congrad's!!!! Light & Love
Haick Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic poem's 2nd place win in the contest, Nikko. Enjoy your win! Always, Annalise
Freeman Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Nikko, good to see you at the top in this second place honor with worthy reason. Agape, Moses
Richards Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 11:11 AM
not only a beauty in words....but a beauty in form and layout!! Well deserved win, dear Nikko!! Congratulations!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 11:01 AM
WAY to GO, NIKKO. Second place. I told you not to worry!! Have an awesome Friday, cutie pie!
Devonshire Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 10:18 AM
I knew this outstanding poem would rank high, Nikko. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Lee Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 10:08 AM
So very, very Great! Congrats! :)
Onclaud Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 9:16 AM
dream on and knock me down with more, ms. manita pacquiao!! love the " brocade" feel of this, nikks! high-five to you for the huge win! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 8:45 AM
Cool congrats sweet friend Nikko on your amazing win in the Winter Free Verse contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy your well deserved top spot for a top notch poem..luv..
Bloomsfield Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 12:06 AM
Your poetry is getting more beautiful each day,tmfs . .
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