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Sunburst - Made Into a Song

Sun brush slow as dawn's light breaks kiss gently on this heart that wakes warm up days til night stand guard when breeze blows brisk and mighty hard Tap lightly on her peeked cheek this morn where thoughts of love and life are born bring forth to her peace and hope and faith in man from words God spoke Impart comfort and ease in rays you share lighten our load on that cross we bare Rise up high and in blue skies do rest soothe our souls with loyal hearts abreast Sun brush slow as dawn's light breaks Paint with grace 'pon swan still lakes

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/16/2017 6:05:00 PM

Beautiful, great when someone puts music to your words!!! :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2017 5:28:00 AM

Good Morning Tim. Congratulations on this being turned into a song. I just heard it play and it is marvelous. This entry is so peaceful and tranquil not to mention marvelous imagery. We readers and listeners thank you. Well done entirely with so much beauty and grace.

Sara Ella

Date: 4/12/2017 2:03:00 AM

The music is so soothing and bright - it follows your poem so perfectly <3 A beautiful combination :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/11/2017 4:16:00 PM

So beautiful and calming. I listen to music while in surgery and during medical testing. I will not be without music, it's importance that crucial for my spirit.This would be wonderful to hear to transport the mind somewhere tranquil. Your words are uplifting, the music, sublime. Fabulous write Tim and kudos to Paul for putting your words into a lovely song. a special favexxx

Darren White

Date: 4/11/2017 11:49:00 AM

This song and the music is sooooo awesome! It's a fave and a 7 from me. Totally worth it.

Tim Smith
Date: 4/11/2017 1:25:00 PM

Thank you my friend.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/11/2017 10:08:00 AM

It is mesmerizing indeed..How beautiful..So magical..And its gonna get a fave:) :).Im so proud of you dear friend.

Tim Smith
Date: 4/11/2017 10:15:00 AM

Thank you Charma. It is an honour when someone sets your words to music as you know by your poem Little by Little done by Archie Clifford. : )

Chris Green

Date: 4/11/2017 10:00:00 AM

Tim, the poem is beautiful and the song is so soothing and magical. As if sitting by a meandering stream while listening. Bravo to both of you

Tim Smith
Date: 4/11/2017 10:03:00 AM

Thanks Chris...glad you were able to listen...I'll share the finished product when he is done.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/11/2017 9:39:00 AM

Please bear with me...Trying to get the audio uploaded...The file is too big

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/11/2017 9:32:00 AM

beautiful dawn in your beautiful poem ... 'grace 'pon swan still lakes' ... Love them ...

Tim Smith
Date: 4/11/2017 10:12:00 AM

Thanks Probir