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Sunburst - Made Into a Song

Sun brush slow as dawn's light breaks
kiss gently on this heart that wakes
warm up days   til night stand guard
when breeze blows brisk and mighty hard

Tap lightly on her peeked cheek this morn
where thoughts of love and life are born
bring forth to her    peace and hope
and faith in man from words God spoke

Impart comfort and ease in rays you share
lighten our load on that cross we bare
Rise up high and in blue skies do rest
soothe our souls with loyal hearts abreast

Sun brush slow as dawn's light breaks
Paint with grace 'pon swan still lakes

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/16/2017 6:05:00 PM

Beautiful, great when someone puts music to your words!!! :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2017 5:28:00 AM

Good Morning Tim. Congratulations on this being turned into a song. I just heard it play and it is marvelous. This entry is so peaceful and tranquil not to mention marvelous imagery. We readers and listeners thank you. Well done entirely with so much beauty and grace.

Sara Ella

Date: 4/12/2017 2:03:00 AM

The music is so soothing and bright - it follows your poem so perfectly <3 A beautiful combination :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/11/2017 4:16:00 PM

So beautiful and calming. I listen to music while in surgery and during medical testing. I will not be without music, it's importance that crucial for my spirit.This would be wonderful to hear to transport the mind somewhere tranquil. Your words are uplifting, the music, sublime. Fabulous write Tim and kudos to Paul for putting your words into a lovely song. a special favexxx