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Sunburn Is No Fun

Slipping slowly across the sky, Summer sun in hot sizzling bliss Permits no hasty alibi, Neither offers a gentle kiss, While ample creams will justify Protective lotions we dismiss, So, lest we blister, we must care, Protective shirts and sunscreen wear. written May 28, 2021

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/28/2021 4:03:00 PM

Sunburn can be serious.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/28/2021 4:07:00 PM

Yes, it can, so avoid it whenever possible. Thanks for your comment, Kim.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/28/2021 12:14:00 PM

Hello Milton, yes beware of the hot sun because you canget a nasty sunburn. Can you look me up on Soup mail ? I want to talk to you. Thank you.Milton my friend.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/28/2021 12:15:00 PM

Thanks so much, Darlene. I sure will. I'll do it now.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/28/2021 11:51:00 AM

So clever, really like 'sizzline bliss' and 'neither offers a gentle kiss' - while I don't sunburn that easily, I should remember to wear sunblock - especially on my nose!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/28/2021 12:15:00 PM

Yes, indeed, Michelle. Thanks so much for your read and your insightful comments.