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Sunbeams Moonbeams

Sunbeams Moonbeams Morning Nascent, fresh Yawning, stretching, chirping Sunrise, sunbeams, nightfall, moonbeams Floating, fantasizing, dreaming Magical, mystical Eventide 8-31-21 Contest: Diamante Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/26/2021 11:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely "Sunbeams Moonbeams" write. Morning and evening are two wonderful times of the day. Have a blessed day with your win.............

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/28/2021 9:21:00 AM

Thank you Paula! I do love morning - so fresh and hopeful - and evening with its sense of gathering in and completion! Sending you all the blessings of the season.

Marilene Evans

Date: 9/24/2021 12:24:00 PM

Congrats, Sam! Nicely done. Charming.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/28/2021 9:20:00 AM

Hi Marilene! Thank you! I had such a good time exploring the parameters of this poetic form. I am so glad you liked it! Sending you all the blessings of the season and for your class on Friday. As a piano/vocal major I remember presenting pieces in class - lots of preparation!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/2/2021 1:34:00 AM

An amazing piece of art, Sam:)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/3/2021 10:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Jo. Your message means so much to me. Morning and evening intrinsically are such amazing opportunities to create art with words. This style didn't come easily but I eventually did have fun with it. Blessings to you! :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/1/2021 11:42:00 AM

Lovely words. Such a beautiful thought process... love it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 1:01:00 PM

Thank you sweet friend! The words for this came slowly! I am so glad for your feedback and that you liked this - means so much to me! Sending twenty four hour blessings and a hug!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/1/2021 6:13:00 AM

Beautifully written Sam :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 1:06:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. Your message is a blessing for my day. Sending blessings back to you for beautiful sunrise and sunsets!

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/31/2021 8:22:00 PM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this winning entry... exposing your awesome vocabulary. God bless you.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 1:11:00 PM

Sending you many thoughts of gratitude Beata! Finding new words always sparks my inspiration and motivates me to reach for new heights - so do new forms. The soup has been a veritable plethora of new forms to learn and word challenges. Sending you blessings dear friend! Hope you are well!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/31/2021 11:57:00 AM

Sam, I've been struggling at LENGTH to write one of these, and here you come along and make it look easy. This is GREAT! Janice

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2021 1:43:00 PM

Oh, Janice, thank you so much. Like you I struggled with this form. I just couldn't seem to get into the flow or structure - especially without articles or connecting words! Several tries! You made my day a put a BIG :D on my face. Thank you! It all came together for me when I realized that there are two opposing parts to the diamond - one feeding off of the other - so to speak. I hope you will enter. Will look for your "diamond!" Blessings of inspiration to you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/31/2021 10:37:00 AM

Like how you captured the whole day Sam, best of luck in the contest and enjoy the week ahead. Over Fork Over. Tom

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2021 10:57:00 AM

Hi Tom! Thank you so much. Your words are always a source of encouragement. Struggled with this form. It seemed to me that this form is about opposites - day/night; dreams/nightmares; calm/storms - a total change of mood and theme in the middle of the poem without connecting words! Thank you for giving my heart a lift! Hope you have a great week my friend. Over Fork Over!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/31/2021 10:29:00 AM

Nice one!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2021 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Kim. This form is challenging! I so glad you liked it and enjoyed watching the sunrise and moonrise with me! Blessings!