Sun Tales

Whispering waters,
Glistening tales of the sun:
Narrative of light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 5:40 PM
Delightfully bright Haiku Raul >> James
Shahwan Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Harmonious poem. Wishing you all the best.
Freeman Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 11:20 AM
Masterful presentation, Raul, in Haiku form. Sincerely, Moses
Gass Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Lovely imagery that paints a crystal story! Beautful Haiku, Raul! Love, Robin
Brown Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 7:47 AM
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Culverhouse Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 6:57 AM
thanks for your comments, good job here!
Devonshire Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 9:25 AM
Interesting image.
Brown Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 6:02 AM
Thank you for this most enjoyable read Raul. Love, Carol
Hilliker Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 10:02 PM
Great Haiku. Thanks for sharing.
Lopez Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 8:48 PM
a very descriptive wite my friend very nice....
Gorelick Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 4:21 PM
You are the master..lovely. BG
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 3:37 PM
Great Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 3:10 PM
you are a good narrator of light Raul..i love these whispers..what a beautiful Haiku,you are so talenteeeeedddd:)Charma
Hilliker Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 2:09 PM
Nicely done!
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