Sun Tales

Whispering waters, Glistening tales of the sun: Narrative of light.

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Date: 10/23/2009 5:40:00 PM

Delightfully bright Haiku Raul >> James

Date: 10/22/2009 2:23:00 PM

Harmonious poem. Wishing you all the best.

Date: 10/20/2009 11:20:00 AM

Masterful presentation, Raul, in Haiku form. Sincerely, Moses

Date: 10/20/2009 10:50:00 AM

Lovely imagery that paints a crystal story! Beautful Haiku, Raul! Love, Robin

Date: 10/20/2009 7:47:00 AM

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Date: 10/20/2009 6:57:00 AM

thanks for your comments, good job here!

Date: 10/19/2009 9:25:00 AM

Interesting image.

Date: 10/19/2009 6:02:00 AM

Thank you for this most enjoyable read Raul. Love, Carol

Date: 10/18/2009 10:02:00 PM

Great Haiku. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 10/18/2009 8:48:00 PM

a very descriptive wite my friend very nice....

Date: 10/18/2009 4:21:00 PM

You are the master..lovely. BG

Date: 10/18/2009 3:37:00 PM

Great Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Date: 10/18/2009 3:10:00 PM

you are a good narrator of light Raul..i love these whispers..what a beautiful Haiku,you are so talenteeeeedddd:)Charma

Date: 10/18/2009 2:09:00 PM

Nicely done!