Sun Salutation

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Each morning I stretch and start my day Be the sun asleep or just away I smile while looking up at the sky Oftentimes the sun is nowhere nigh I do my sun salutation way on high Because I know the sun's nearby It won't be long till we see its ray And its smiling face comes back our way AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on February 25, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/25/2018 10:43:00 PM

Such a nice, cheery thought during the winter months --- I think I'll incorporate this practice (along with "Thank God I'm alive and "Another Day Above Ground") first thing in the a.m. Great way to start the day! Thanks a million, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/26/2018 9:45:00 AM

LOL - You crack me up, Gershon. Thanks for your cheerful visit and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2018 5:38:00 PM

Cutely rhymed poem, Line. I like that: sun salutation you do!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/25/2018 7:24:00 PM

Thank you for your visit, Andrea.

Melissa Tracy

Date: 2/25/2018 4:36:00 PM

Nice rthym and flow to it...Lovely... enjoyable read :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/25/2018 5:21:00 PM

Thanks, Melissa. Appreciate your visit and comment.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 2/25/2018 4:14:00 PM

A nice practice to greet the sun each day, or be able to do so.I think I'll try to greet the sun each day, but with a glass wine in hand giving it a toast.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/25/2018 5:22:00 PM

Ah - good idea. A sundown salutation. I like it. Thanks for your visit and suggestion, Alfred.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/25/2018 2:54:00 PM

Very nice and flows well :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/25/2018 3:37:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Heidi.