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Image result for pictures of doves on the nest in spring

Sun Rise

golden sun rises
revealing spring blossoms wake
yellow pollen falls

upon nests of birds in love
vows of lasting affections

lovenaturetanka

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Gail Debole

Date: 4/3/2022 2:45:00 PM

Hi Sara, Appreciate the peaceful images you describe with your words. So beautiful. - Gail

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/3/2022 4:15:00 PM

Thank you, Gail. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2022 2:21:00 PM

so sweet, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/1/2022 4:32:00 PM

Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 3/30/2022 7:11:00 PM

Hi Sara, you have pooled a number of lovely images in your tanka--- the rising sun, the verdant spring, the blooms shedding yellow pollen, the birds and their love making..... ! An excellent tanka !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/31/2022 5:14:00 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. Your comments so inspiring this morning. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/25/2022 1:19:00 PM

Hi Sara, imagine, if there were no sun, we would not be, why does Putin want to kill images , the sun would still have sunrise and sunset but set over a desecrated land, an empty planet. Yet he incessantly kills innocent citizens and children, shame on him. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/26/2022 4:51:00 AM

Jennifer, Putin is filled with greed sent by the Devil himself. It is so sad what is happening but what can we do. Drop some really bad bombs on Russia? They say he has his nuclear systems ready with one bomb dropped it automatically sends nuclear bombs out to predetermined sites. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/25/2022 12:27:00 PM

Such a stunning Tanka, Sara. You were able to convey perfectly the sunrise, birds, and spring blossoms. Blessings Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/25/2022 12:41:00 PM

Thank you, Sotto. I need all the blessings I can get. Your visit was encouraging. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/25/2022 11:28:00 AM

One of the best things in all of creation, I'm always up early and never tire of watching the sun rise from a small spark of light over the mountains to a giant glowing orb. Hope you're keeping well Sara. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/25/2022 12:36:00 PM

Tom, A sunrise and a sunset are two very special events in a day. I enjoy both but don't get to see them as often as I would like. I enjoy the sunrise in the morning in the comfortable air of spring and fall the best. Your visits are always uplifting. Living in a mountainous area or where you can see the mountains makes the scene even more inviting. Thanks for the visit. Sara

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