Sun Rage

SUN RAGE
The grass  is green no more
No flowers are  in bloom
Some wilted twigs yellow, wistful
There's a palpable sense of gloom.
It was not always like this...
Those days there was cheer
All around and here
Trees , heavy with fruit, swayed to  breeze
Content to  lavishly, disperse their seed
Playful kids howled and squealed
Passersby stopped to sneak a peek
The green field truly a gardener's delight
During the day and at night
With its refreshing cool clime
And a lingering fragrance of lime.
But, in  the year of famine...
Water became scant and scarce
Over the surface, cracks appeared
The birds and  bees too disappeared
Of rain drops, dew there was no sign
Natures fury cruel, unkind
Unleashed despair and decline
Sparing none ,nor humankind.
Mother earth weary,her bosom dry
Heaved a  deep and tearless sigh
She knew well, now  the time was ripe
To bid  her precious greens  good bye...


Creative collective Anthology series
Date July 20 2017

Footnote
Northern Indian plains are dependent on timely monsoon rains for their fertility after an intense summer and if these are deficient or get delayed there is a threat of widespread famine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/1/2017 4:40:00 PM
wow, Sushma, I can see why this one won. It's REALLY good!! Congrats to you.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 1/1/2017 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Feel humbled by your praise.
Date: 1/1/2017 11:42:00 AM
Well done, Sushma! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 1/1/2017 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, sir!
Date: 1/1/2017 2:13:00 AM
And then the monsoon comes and drowns it all. Great poem, Sushma, congrats on your placement!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 1/1/2017 7:55:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 12/28/2016 11:20:00 PM
So truly you have described the fury of famine! This is well written, Sushma:)
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 12/29/2016 4:06:00 AM
Thank you, Jo!
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