Jan Allison Poet Etheree

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Sun Kissed

Sun 
you shine
so brightly.
Radiating, 
giving energy 
with your warm golden glow. 
We cannot live without you. 
Your solar smile beams soothing rays,
from many a million miles away
yet still I can feel you kissing my skin.

3rd May 2016

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Valerie Staton January 25, 2019 at 8:46 AM Cute!

Carole Duet May 7, 2018 at 6:20 PM I love this little etheree, Jan. So clever and full of warmth. And, where in the world did you find this perfect illustration?

Tsakiso Maluleke May 25, 2016 at 2:25 AM TOUNCHING AND STRAIGHT TO THE POINT.. Jan Allison May 25, 2016 at 11:54 AM Thanks Tsakiso:-) hugs jan xx

Funom Makama May 12, 2016 at 11:26 AM Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder. Jan Allison May 22, 2016 at 8:18 AM Thanks Funom:-) hugs Jan xx

Archontoula Alexandropoulou May 7, 2016 at 1:07 PM Alliteration brimming with warm sounds and colours. Lovely Jan Allison May 9, 2016 at 6:27 AM Thanks Archontoula:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter May 5, 2016 at 10:16 PM The words and the artwork--awesome. The last line--perfect. (And you make it look so easy [but I know it isn't].) hugs xxx Jan Allison May 9, 2016 at 6:29 AM Thanks so much for your lovely comment Paul - I love the final line too - I am just thankful my muse is behaving at the moment - she does get stroppy like a teenager sometimes and the words won't flow lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath May 5, 2016 at 9:47 AM Excellent poem my lovely friend written very nicely. Thanks for sharing. Good luck if for contest. (+7)Loved always, bl Jan Allison May 5, 2016 at 11:17 AM Just a fun write BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Walter T. Ashe May 4, 2016 at 10:20 PM Your write is about the Love for our universe's light and warmth source! And yes, "we cannot live without you!" A write with a warm smile to it! Jan Allison May 5, 2016 at 2:26 AM Thanks Walter :-) hugs Jan xx

Jill Spagnola May 4, 2016 at 12:20 PM p.s. though my skin remains pale:) Jan Allison May 4, 2016 at 4:05 PM Mine too:-) hugs jan xx

Jill Spagnola May 4, 2016 at 12:18 PM Jan, I love how your adoration of the center of our "System" is displayed by the many forms you lovingly create giving it's righteous place in poetry:) a sunshiny 7 from me! with love, jill Jan Allison May 4, 2016 at 4:05 PM Thanks Jill - i am not a great sun worshiper but I do love walking with mum on a sunny spring day. None of us have ever been beach babes even though we live only 5 mins from a glorious golden beach:-) hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv May 4, 2016 at 7:34 AM How beautiful!! :) :) Jan Allison May 4, 2016 at 7:55 AM Thanks Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray May 4, 2016 at 7:13 AM Reminds me of my sun worshiping youth Jan. By coincidence, my mother also died from malignant melanoma. Jan Allison May 4, 2016 at 7:18 AM I have never been a great sun worshipper - dad actually had 3 forms of cancer when he died but had always lead us to believe it was basal skin cancer he had, so to learn he had malignant melanoma was a bit of a shock too:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2016 at 5:40 AM - I love the sun kiss, Jan :) - # 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison May 4, 2016 at 7:17 AM I somehow thought you would like this one dear friend Sun:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel May 4, 2016 at 3:11 AM Beautiful:) Though here in India, people don't much like the sun:) Yet, it's true that we can't live without the sun:) And thank you very much for soup mail. I'm glad you don't mind:):} Jan Allison May 4, 2016 at 7:16 AM No worries Jo we all get inspired by the theme and often similar ideas crop up:-) thanks for commenting on this poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May May 3, 2016 at 5:22 PM Very nice Etheree Jan...best wishes Jan Allison May 3, 2016 at 5:23 PM Thanks Jospeh just a fun write - it was a gorgeous spring day on the Island and this little poem came to me:-) hugs janxx

Tom Quigley May 3, 2016 at 4:33 PM Very nice! This is a neat form; I ought to try it... Jan Allison May 3, 2016 at 4:47 PM Thanks Tom I think it is only the second one I have written - was inspired by a glorious spring day here on our little Island:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane May 3, 2016 at 4:31 PM That was a nice conversation you had with the sun, Jan. No wonder he smiles down upon you. Jan Allison May 3, 2016 at 4:33 PM Its been a gorgeous day Lin mum and I had a lovely walk in the sunshine:-) In fact it's been a fabulous day all round:-) hugs Jan xx