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sun hiku

sun takes its place
            in dawn's new brightness . . . 
   gray
          clouds
                    dismissed

sunhaiku

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Howard Kerr

December 19, 2025 at 10:48 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your success with this work. It is so unique, imaginative, and lyrical, Howard

Andrea Dietrich

December 20, 2025 at 12:48 PM

Thanks so much. It is one of my personal favorites in haiku category

Terry Miller

May 1, 2025 at 8:13 AM

That's a good one Andrea, congratulations

Paul Marc

December 16, 2024 at 8:55 PM

Fav

Crystol Woods

December 10, 2024 at 10:53 AM

So visual! Love it! Xo

Sara Kendrick

December 9, 2024 at 2:12 PM

Ahhh!! I like this one, Andrea. Very creative work and what a win. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

December 9, 2024 at 7:53 AM

I can see it! Congrats, Andrea!

Valsa George

December 9, 2024 at 2:56 AM

Quite a different way of seeing things. Great haiku..... Congratulations dear Andrea on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2024 at 6:49 AM

Thanks I like personification even in haiku sometimes

Ink Empress

December 8, 2024 at 11:36 PM

Congratulations on your win sweet andrea! You are the queen of forms! Youv nailed it ofcourse, love seeing you on winners list, i think i see, theres some old haikus in winners list too i should hav entered hah! Sending you light

Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2024 at 6:49 AM

Yes you should have!

Karen Jones

December 8, 2024 at 11:24 PM

Imaginative haiku! Love the king sun imagery! Congratulations Andrea on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2024 at 6:50 AM

Thanks so much, Karen

thriveni c mysore

December 8, 2024 at 7:44 PM

serenity! lovely haiku. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!

Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2024 at 6:50 AM

Thanks

Darlene De Beaulieu

December 6, 2024 at 11:37 AM

Hello Andrea, Just by reading this poem i can picture the scene. Hugs. /Darlene/ /Merry Christmas. /Darlene/

Paige Hind

December 4, 2024 at 6:31 PM

A very lovely picture - <3

Ilene Bauer

December 2, 2024 at 1:23 PM

this is lovely, andrea! good luck in the contest...

John Read

December 2, 2024 at 8:41 AM

Hi Andrea, king sun is hiding behind the clouds today in London, good luck in the contest. xx

Mulu Magdalinos

December 2, 2024 at 7:55 AM

Very lovely haiku, Andrea. God bless you.

Yann Rolland

December 2, 2024 at 12:14 AM

enjoyed, i seek serenity, merci mon amie

Mike Bayles

December 1, 2024 at 9:29 PM

Andrea, I love the serenity.

Ink Empress

December 1, 2024 at 9:26 PM

Dear sweet andrea this is beautiful and im so proud to know a poet like you that can nail any form like an expert! Just love the way youv used sun here and how deeply moving the imagery youv painted here is! Clever! Best wishes for the contest. I feel like doing some of these contests. Sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich

December 3, 2024 at 1:40 PM

Wish you hadn't missed out on this one. Thanks, Ink