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sun hiku

sun takes its place in dawn's new brightness . . . gray clouds dismissed

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Date: 5/1/2025 8:13:00 AM
That's a good one Andrea, congratulations
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Date: 12/16/2024 8:55:00 PM
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Date: 12/10/2024 10:53:00 AM
So visual! Love it! Xo
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Date: 12/9/2024 2:12:00 PM
Ahhh!! I like this one, Andrea. Very creative work and what a win. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 12/9/2024 7:53:00 AM
I can see it! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 12/9/2024 2:56:00 AM
Quite a different way of seeing things. Great haiku..... Congratulations dear Andrea on your win.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2024 6:49:00 AM
Thanks I like personification even in haiku sometimes
Date: 12/8/2024 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win sweet andrea! You are the queen of forms! Youv nailed it ofcourse, love seeing you on winners list, i think i see, theres some old haikus in winners list too i should hav entered hah! Sending you light
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2024 6:49:00 AM
Yes you should have!
Date: 12/8/2024 11:24:00 PM
Imaginative haiku! Love the king sun imagery! Congratulations Andrea on your win!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2024 6:50:00 AM
Thanks so much, Karen
Date: 12/8/2024 7:44:00 PM
serenity! lovely haiku. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2024 6:50:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 12/6/2024 11:37:00 AM
Hello Andrea, Just by reading this poem i can picture the scene. Hugs. /Darlene/ /Merry Christmas. /Darlene/
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Date: 12/4/2024 6:31:00 PM
A very lovely picture - <3
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Date: 12/2/2024 1:23:00 PM
this is lovely, andrea! good luck in the contest...
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Date: 12/2/2024 8:41:00 AM
Hi Andrea, king sun is hiding behind the clouds today in London, good luck in the contest. xx
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Date: 12/2/2024 7:55:00 AM
Very lovely haiku, Andrea. God bless you.
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Date: 12/2/2024 1:53:00 AM
I can feel the calm wash over me reading this :)
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Date: 12/2/2024 12:14:00 AM
enjoyed, i seek serenity, merci mon amie
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Date: 12/1/2024 9:29:00 PM
Andrea, I love the serenity.
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Date: 12/1/2024 9:26:00 PM
Dear sweet andrea this is beautiful and im so proud to know a poet like you that can nail any form like an expert! Just love the way youv used sun here and how deeply moving the imagery youv painted here is! Clever! Best wishes for the contest. I feel like doing some of these contests. Sending you light always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/3/2024 1:40:00 PM
Wish you hadn't missed out on this one. Thanks, Ink
Date: 12/1/2024 9:15:00 PM
Very pretty, Andrea. I loved the bird's eye view. Good luck!
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Date: 12/1/2024 8:24:00 PM
Nice haiku.
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Date: 12/1/2024 4:17:00 PM
Nice haiku, Andrea, King Sun's about to go to bed here, casting long shadows. Hoping to see him tomorrow.
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Date: 12/1/2024 4:01:00 PM
Such a lovely Haiku with spectacular imagery Andrea. Love it. Hugs.
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