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sun hiku

sun takes its place
            in dawn's new brightness . . . 
   gray
          clouds
                    dismissed

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Terry Miller

Date: 5/1/2025 8:13:00 AM

That's a good one Andrea, congratulations

P.M. Richter

Date: 12/16/2024 8:55:00 PM

Fav

Crystol Woods

Date: 12/10/2024 10:53:00 AM

So visual! Love it! Xo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2024 2:12:00 PM

Ahhh!! I like this one, Andrea. Very creative work and what a win. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/9/2024 7:53:00 AM

I can see it! Congrats, Andrea!

Valsa George

Date: 12/9/2024 2:56:00 AM

Quite a different way of seeing things. Great haiku..... Congratulations dear Andrea on your win.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2024 6:49:00 AM

Thanks I like personification even in haiku sometimes

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2024 11:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win sweet andrea! You are the queen of forms! Youv nailed it ofcourse, love seeing you on winners list, i think i see, theres some old haikus in winners list too i should hav entered hah! Sending you light

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2024 6:49:00 AM

Yes you should have!

Karen Jones

Date: 12/8/2024 11:24:00 PM

Imaginative haiku! Love the king sun imagery! Congratulations Andrea on your win!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2024 6:50:00 AM

Thanks so much, Karen

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/8/2024 7:44:00 PM

serenity! lovely haiku. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2024 6:50:00 AM

Thanks

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/6/2024 11:37:00 AM

Hello Andrea, Just by reading this poem i can picture the scene. Hugs. /Darlene/ /Merry Christmas. /Darlene/

Paige Hind

Date: 12/4/2024 6:31:00 PM

A very lovely picture - <3

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/2/2024 1:23:00 PM

this is lovely, andrea! good luck in the contest...

John Read

Date: 12/2/2024 8:41:00 AM

Hi Andrea, king sun is hiding behind the clouds today in London, good luck in the contest. xx

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 12/2/2024 7:55:00 AM

Very lovely haiku, Andrea. God bless you.

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/2/2024 12:14:00 AM

enjoyed, i seek serenity, merci mon amie

Mike Bayles

Date: 12/1/2024 9:29:00 PM

Andrea, I love the serenity.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/1/2024 9:26:00 PM

Dear sweet andrea this is beautiful and im so proud to know a poet like you that can nail any form like an expert! Just love the way youv used sun here and how deeply moving the imagery youv painted here is! Clever! Best wishes for the contest. I feel like doing some of these contests. Sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/3/2024 1:40:00 PM

Wish you hadn't missed out on this one. Thanks, Ink