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Sun Dear

Feeling hot, hot, hot seems the mantra now Forget a song Can't even hear a meow. Calling to you, Sun Dear! Uncomfortable heat Smelly colleagues Even in AC rooms no respite indeed. Listen to me, Sun Dear! All this money in my purse Can't go out This heat's a curse. Appealing to you, Sun Dear! Drip, Drip, Drip My sweaty neck And then the back What the heck. I am melting here, Sun Dear! I can feel myself cooking going hiss, hiss, hiss A good sunny day doesn't refer to this. No more havoc please, Sun Dear!

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Date: 7/20/2024 4:51:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:13:00 AM
Nimi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 2:07:00 PM
NIMN, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 5/10/2014 6:10:00 AM
Wonderful write Nimi ! Simply truly beautifully slammed !A well deserved great win ! Congrats !
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Date: 5/9/2014 4:08:00 PM
Nimi, you slammed! Congratulations on winning in the contest for Slammers! Verlena
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