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Sun Dancing

dancing across sky stepping between passing clouds not skipping a beat the moon longs for attention in the end sun is eclipsed Andrea's "One in Five for Beauty Strive Contest"

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Skat A

Date: 2/11/2014 7:36:00 PM

Thank you for the epic dancing imagery... ~ Love ~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2014 3:11:00 PM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2014 3:39:00 PM

Thanks Sara, if you have a chance check out my latest poem "Thought Police" I think you would appreciate it.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/13/2014 8:20:00 AM

A sweet and lilting piece. Congrats. BG

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2014 9:00:00 AM

Thanks Barbara

Joseph May

Date: 1/12/2014 5:07:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2014 5:55:00 PM

Thanks Joseph.

Donna Jones

Date: 1/12/2014 4:46:00 PM

Love the moon winning..eclipsing the sun! Wonderful win Richard....congratulations.. :-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2014 5:56:00 PM

Thanks Donna, this was a fun one to write.

Roger Horsch

Date: 1/12/2014 11:37:00 AM

Congrats Richard, I got to read this wonderful poem again.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2014 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Roger.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2014 12:59:00 AM

Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2014 11:59:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2014 9:36:00 PM

Very well done, Richard! a Clever one. Congrats for your win.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2014 12:03:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I made a change to third line.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/10/2014 9:27:00 AM

Love the image here of the moon as a young girl dancing along trying to get sun boy's attention. Another amazing poem from you my friend

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/10/2014 9:49:00 AM

I had fun writing this one. I'm glad you like it.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 1/8/2014 9:38:00 PM

Sun Dancing was line dancing it's way across the poetic sky, thanks to Richard! Loved it! chuck

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2014 8:17:00 AM

Thanks Chuck

Roger Horsch

Date: 1/8/2014 2:26:00 PM

I can see that you were blessed by God Himself to be able to write so well. Another very well written poem Richard.....Roger

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2014 2:29:00 PM

What a nice thing to say Roger, I believe myself that God has been very kind to bestow me with this gift.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/8/2014 1:19:00 PM

the wealth and depth in this write Rick are vast and wonderful Shadow x smile hug

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2014 1:20:00 PM

Hugs back to you Shadow.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 1/8/2014 8:15:00 AM

A perfect Tanka Richard, happy and well written. Anne

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2014 8:19:00 AM

Thanks Anne

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/7/2014 5:55:00 PM

I love your creative mind Richard.Is mama still writing?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2014 8:22:00 AM

Thanks Charmaine, yes mom now has a second poem posted.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/7/2014 11:19:00 AM

- Dance with the sun !!! - Good luck in the contest, Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2014 8:23:00 AM

Thanks, a little luck couldn't hurt.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/7/2014 9:29:00 AM

feeel-good melody; i bounce with your sun dance, rich... rated greeat!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2014 8:24:00 AM

Huggs back and thanks Nette.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/7/2014 9:00:00 AM

:) Oh Richard. How I love your work. Simply beautiful. It lifted my spirit. Thanks ever so much. Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/8/2014 8:28:00 AM

Muck eh????? HA HA! Oh Rick....Sometimes it does feel like muck! That's ok! Congrats on your win with your Santa poem!!! ;) Got me going a bit with that cause MRS Claus...better love SANTA the way he is, eh???? It's OK...I forgive you....I'm going to go on a diet.....sometime...soon! HA HA HA HA HA!!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2014 8:26:00 AM

Sorry busy day Yesterday so not muck soup time. I'm glad my little poem gave you a lift. Hugs Rick.