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Sun Dancing

dancing across sky
stepping between passing clouds
not skipping a beat
the moon longs for attention
in the end sun is eclipsed


Andrea's "One in Five for Beauty Strive Contest"

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Skat A

February 11, 2014 at 7:36 PM

Thank you for the epic dancing imagery... ~ Love ~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick

January 19, 2014 at 3:11 PM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

January 19, 2014 at 3:39 PM

Thanks Sara, if you have a chance check out my latest poem "Thought Police" I think you would appreciate it.

Barbara Gorelick

January 13, 2014 at 8:20 AM

A sweet and lilting piece. Congrats. BG

Richard Lamoureux

January 13, 2014 at 9:00 AM

Thanks Barbara

Joseph May

January 12, 2014 at 5:07 PM

Congrats on a fine win Richard

Richard Lamoureux

January 12, 2014 at 5:55 PM

Thanks Joseph.

Donna Jones

January 12, 2014 at 4:46 PM

Love the moon winning..eclipsing the sun! Wonderful win Richard....congratulations.. :-)

Richard Lamoureux

January 12, 2014 at 5:56 PM

Thanks Donna, this was a fun one to write.

Roger Horsch

January 12, 2014 at 11:37 AM

Congrats Richard, I got to read this wonderful poem again.

Richard Lamoureux

January 12, 2014 at 11:58 AM

Thanks Roger.

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 12, 2014 at 12:59 AM

Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Richard

Richard Lamoureux

January 12, 2014 at 11:59 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram.

Andrea Dietrich

January 11, 2014 at 9:36 PM

Very well done, Richard! a Clever one. Congrats for your win.

Richard Lamoureux

January 12, 2014 at 12:03 PM

Thanks Andrea, I made a change to third line.

Monterey Sirak

January 10, 2014 at 9:27 AM

Love the image here of the moon as a young girl dancing along trying to get sun boy's attention. Another amazing poem from you my friend

Richard Lamoureux

January 10, 2014 at 9:49 AM

I had fun writing this one. I'm glad you like it.

Chuck Melugin

January 8, 2014 at 9:38 PM

Sun Dancing was line dancing it's way across the poetic sky, thanks to Richard! Loved it! chuck

Richard Lamoureux

January 9, 2014 at 8:17 AM

Thanks Chuck

Roger Horsch

January 8, 2014 at 2:26 PM

I can see that you were blessed by God Himself to be able to write so well. Another very well written poem Richard.....Roger

Richard Lamoureux

January 8, 2014 at 2:29 PM

What a nice thing to say Roger, I believe myself that God has been very kind to bestow me with this gift.

Shadow Hamilton

January 8, 2014 at 1:19 PM

the wealth and depth in this write Rick are vast and wonderful Shadow x smile hug

Richard Lamoureux

January 8, 2014 at 1:20 PM

Hugs back to you Shadow.

Anne Rutherford

January 8, 2014 at 8:15 AM

A perfect Tanka Richard, happy and well written. Anne

Richard Lamoureux

January 8, 2014 at 8:19 AM

Thanks Anne

Charmaine Chircop

January 7, 2014 at 5:55 PM

I love your creative mind Richard.Is mama still writing?

Richard Lamoureux

January 8, 2014 at 8:22 AM

Thanks Charmaine, yes mom now has a second poem posted.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 7, 2014 at 11:19 AM

- Dance with the sun !!! - Good luck in the contest, Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

January 8, 2014 at 8:23 AM

Thanks, a little luck couldn't hurt.

Nette Onclaud

January 7, 2014 at 9:29 AM

feeel-good melody; i bounce with your sun dance, rich... rated greeat!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux

January 8, 2014 at 8:24 AM

Huggs back and thanks Nette.

Eileen Manassian

January 7, 2014 at 9:00 AM

:) Oh Richard. How I love your work. Simply beautiful. It lifted my spirit. Thanks ever so much. Hugs

Eileen Manassian

January 8, 2014 at 8:28 AM

Muck eh????? HA HA! Oh Rick....Sometimes it does feel like muck! That's ok! Congrats on your win with your Santa poem!!! ;) Got me going a bit with that cause MRS Claus...better love SANTA the way he is, eh???? It's OK...I forgive you....I'm going to go on a diet.....sometime...soon! HA HA HA HA HA!!!!

Richard Lamoureux

January 8, 2014 at 8:26 AM

Sorry busy day Yesterday so not muck soup time. I'm glad my little poem gave you a lift. Hugs Rick.

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