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Sun Dancing

Sun spawned rainbows dance
spun from a hanging crystal
nature’s disco ball

naturerainbowsunhaiku

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Robert Pettit

February 22, 2014 at 11:17 PM

I could just see John Travolta dancing when I read this short, but sweet write.

Gary Watkins

February 22, 2014 at 11:22 PM

My granddaughter gets pretty excited and dances around a bit when I spin the little crystal in her window and create rainbow sparkles on the wall. Although, she doesn't quite have the moves of Mr. Travolta.

Poet Destroyer A

December 27, 2013 at 5:09 PM

Love it Gary, a lovely haiku. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with the family. xox... Linda

Gary Watkins

December 27, 2013 at 7:39 PM

Thank you, Linda. My mother and I went out for Christmas dinner. That was nice. My daughter and her family are out of the country on vacation right now, so it was quiet, but enjoyable. I hope your holiday was a pleasant one as well. Oh, I have some news for you. I will send you a soup mail.

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 23, 2013 at 12:30 AM

beautiful images, Gary

Gary Watkins

December 23, 2013 at 1:33 AM

Thank you, Dr. Mehta. It was inspired by my granddaughter. She has a crystal hanging in front of the window in her room and early in the morning it will act as a prism for the sunlight. We spin it around and it creates shimmering images on the walls. She and the cat both get very excited when they see it.