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Sun and Sand Minichu

feeling the sand, hotter
through my naked toes with a gentle caress from
saltwater

alive, smiling
through fresh sea air, enlightening
guiling

I breathe
gentle caress
seethe

feeling the sand, hotter
through fresh sea air, enlightening
seethe





Sun and sand Minichu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani
January 10, 2021

Copyright © Regina Mcintosh | Year Posted 2021

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Sara Kendrick Date: 2/5/2021 2:08:00 PM Creative winning work. For sure that sand can get super hot and burn our feet. Congrats on your winner. Sara Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 2/3/2021 7:08:00 AM A lovely write Gina. Congratulations on the win! Linda Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 2/3/2021 6:25:00 AM Charming, Gina ~ congrats Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 2/3/2021 4:04:00 AM Regina, Thanks for participating in my contest. All good with your Minichu except the alignment of rhyme of middle lines of the stanzas with each other. I have seen your comments about being unsure of this form I would say that despite that a very good try. I am sure you will be able to overcome this last misunderstanding of the form in your next try. Still, congrats for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/12/2021 2:39:00 AM I'm glad you gave this form a try and did so well, Regina:) minichu looks hard but is not actually that tough:) Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/10/2021 5:12:00 AM What a disgrace it's ages since I've been on a beach. Lovely poem. ~~ Login to Reply