Sun and Sand Minichu

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feeling the sand, hotter through my naked toes with a gentle caress from saltwater alive, smiling through fresh sea air, enlightening guiling I breathe gentle caress seethe feeling the sand, hotter through fresh sea air, enlightening seethe Sun and sand Minichu Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani January 10, 2021

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2021 2:08:00 PM

Creative winning work. For sure that sand can get super hot and burn our feet. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/3/2021 7:08:00 AM

A lovely write Gina. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/3/2021 6:25:00 AM

Charming, Gina ~ congrats

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/3/2021 4:04:00 AM

Regina, Thanks for participating in my contest. All good with your Minichu except the alignment of rhyme of middle lines of the stanzas with each other. I have seen your comments about being unsure of this form I would say that despite that a very good try. I am sure you will be able to overcome this last misunderstanding of the form in your next try. Still, congrats for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/12/2021 2:39:00 AM

I'm glad you gave this form a try and did so well, Regina:) minichu looks hard but is not actually that tough:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/10/2021 5:12:00 AM

What a disgrace it's ages since I've been on a beach. Lovely poem. ~~