Deborah Burch Poet Diamante

Sun and Moon

Sun
         Celestial behemoth
  Radiating burning energising 
    Day star luminary satellite 
       Waning waxing wooing
            Silvery phantom
                   Moon




04.12.2021©deborah burch

Form: Diamanté

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Joe Maverick July 24, 2023 at 1:05 PM Sun moon day noon, such splendour Yet gone soon.'

Constance La France April 22, 2021 at 11:23 AM Deborah, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with your wonderful Diamante poem, well done, love _ Constance

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2021 at 4:38 PM oh wow, you did a really lovely job here. Awesome! Deborah Burch April 17, 2021 at 4:49 PM Thanks so much Andy!! My first Diamanté lol. But felt it an appropriate form for the theme. Lol. Big huggs and love my friend!! Deb

Joseph P. DiMino April 12, 2021 at 8:03 PM So magical! Nicely stated. Deborah Burch April 13, 2021 at 11:55 AM Awwww!! Thank you Joe!! Very much! Huggs! Deb

Robert Pettit April 12, 2021 at 2:33 PM Nicely written short poem about the two most prominent celestial objects when seen from the earth. Deborah Burch April 13, 2021 at 11:55 AM Thanks Robert!! So many new forms I have not used but willing to step out of my box to try. Lol. Huggs. Deb