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Sun and Moon

Sun Celestial behemoth Radiating burning energising Day star luminary satellite Waning waxing wooing Silvery phantom Moon 04.12.2021©deborah burch Form: Diamanté

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Joe Maverick
Date: 7/24/2023 1:05:00 PM
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Sun moon day noon, such splendour Yet gone soon.'
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Constance La France
Date: 4/22/2021 11:23:00 AM
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Deborah, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with your wonderful Diamante poem, well done, love _ Constance
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/17/2021 4:38:00 PM
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oh wow, you did a really lovely job here. Awesome!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/17/2021 4:49:00 PM
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Thanks so much Andy!! My first Diamanté lol. But felt it an appropriate form for the theme. Lol. Big huggs and love my friend!! Deb
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/12/2021 8:03:00 PM
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So magical! Nicely stated.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/13/2021 11:55:00 AM
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Awwww!! Thank you Joe!! Very much! Huggs! Deb
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Robert Pettit
Date: 4/12/2021 2:33:00 PM
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Nicely written short poem about the two most prominent celestial objects when seen from the earth.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/13/2021 11:55:00 AM
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Thanks Robert!! So many new forms I have not used but willing to step out of my box to try. Lol. Huggs. Deb

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