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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/21/2024 11:56:00 PM

I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2016 12:23:00 PM

DINA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 11/16/2015 12:01:00 AM

Dina, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/1/2011 1:43:00 PM

please give once over to the rhyme scheme and structure of the Italian sonnet, Dina